'The Concrete Garden' - Dan Tee (Original SCARY Poem)

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Uploaded by on Oct 31, 2007

Please be advised, this poem may be frightening to those of a nervous disposition.

'The Concrete Garden'

I stand here at night in the concrete garden
Phantoms around me, I hear their cries
Encompassing me in a terror I love
Their souls are exciting, they make me jump

Spirits in stone and ghouls on the breeze
I dare them to take me with every out-breath
I feel them near me, I see them in thoughts
Horror is rife as I stand here alone

(C) Dan Tee 2007

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  • unibrown

  • @TheRedhub Unibrown?? :D

  • Beautiful and scary. Can i please use your poem to recite in a speech. I promise to credit your poetic work. Cheers!

  • Oooh, absolutely! I'm flattered you'd like to use it. Thank you for your ace comment. Let me know how the speech goes. Dan =:D

  • tonight we won´t sleep thanks to you. lol 5 stars

  • Sorry!!!

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  • haha the warning makes it

  • ur badass accent makes it ten times more scaryer!

  • buenisimo!!!! 5**********

  • Ok. Ill give you credit for sure! Thanks!

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