Please be advised, this poem may be frightening to those of a nervous disposition.
'The Concrete Garden'
I stand here at night in the concrete garden
Phantoms around me, I hear their cries
Encompassing me in a terror I love
Their souls are exciting, they make me jump
Spirits in stone and ghouls on the breeze
I dare them to take me with every out-breath
I feel them near me, I see them in thoughts
Horror is rife as I stand here alone
(C) Dan Tee 2007
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TheRedhub 4 months ago
@TheRedhub Unibrown?? :D
dan9tee 3 months ago
Beautiful and scary. Can i please use your poem to recite in a speech. I promise to credit your poetic work. Cheers!
desgonag 3 years ago
Oooh, absolutely! I'm flattered you'd like to use it. Thank you for your ace comment. Let me know how the speech goes. Dan =:D
dan9tee 3 years ago
tonight we won´t sleep thanks to you. lol 5 stars
tigerus3 4 years ago
Sorry!!!
dan9tee 3 years ago