Into The Light | ORIGINAL POEM

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Poems come to me in all sorts of places and at all sorts of times...This one was drafted on the back of a Pick and Mix bag and my entry ticket at the movie theatre (I had no paper on me - unusually!!), while the trailers were playing. I still have the bag and ticket...:) For some reason, I started to see a rainbow twirling and whirling in my tummy and out the poem came....magical....Enjoy!!

INTO THE LIGHT

I stumble forward into the light
The sun bears down upon my skin
Grown pale through that time
I was lost in the darkness within

I find myself near the top of a mountain
Emerging from a hidden cave, blinking in the sunlight

Inside me, a new feeling is breaking through
A twirling, whirling rainbow fills me up
Warm, hazy, colourful - my heart is thawing at last

My face to the sun, I stand at the edge
Surveying the beauty of this view
Finally, my soul has returned and I can say
'Thank you'

Without your cruelty, I would not have known the joy of this release
Without your lies, I would not have treasured so much those who uphold the truth
Without your ruthlessness, I may never have seen the kindness of certain souls
Without your taking me into the shadows, I would not have arrived at the light of this new day

And without the path you led me down, I would not have reached this place
This place where he stood waiting for me all along
He takes my hand. Warm and strong
No fear. No more. His heart is just like mine.
Clear and pure.
Honest and giving.
A blend like this I never knew.
Without the death you took me to, I would not have experienced this living.

I came this way because of you
And only because of you.
I found this place of heaven, because it was on the other side of the hell you pushed me through.
And for that, I truly thank you.

© Copyright. All rights reserved. Jill J. Jones (Sunbeam) Written 05Feb2007 YouTube video created 16Mar2008

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  • Joyous!

  • @1stPrincessKelly Thank you! I am glad you liked it :)

  • Nice poem! I love to hear original poets

  • @meanmrmustard89 Thank you - I really appreciate you stopping by!! Sunbeam :)

  • Beautiful imagery. Reminds me of a short poetic story. I really like it!

  • @TonyeStarr1 Thank you! I am pleased you enjoyed my writing!! With kindest wishes, Sunbeam :)

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  • I like it!

    - Without the darkness, how could we recognize the light?

  • Beautiful imagery. Reminds me of a short poetic story. I really like it!

  • Hello! Thank you for your comment and vid response - sorry for the delay in replying - I have been away. I will take a peek at your poem :)

  • Very nice poem you have wrote.

    I have submitted my Shadowed world poem as a Video response.

    I would be greaful for some feedback.

    Im going to subscribe to you anyway.

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