Ben Sheftaleh (Stewart Stevenson) is being investigated as to his wareabout three nights ago by an unnamed detective (Malcolm Taylor). Things get a little strange halfway through the questioning when a second detective appears.
My first film based on an original script by D. Whittington.
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Great fun! Love this movie.. the lighting, the camera work, the acting, the sound! Good writing.. very funny. Can't wait to see the next one, and the one after that... and the one after that... :) The cigarette scene is killer and the reveal of the Spoon Hands is awesome.
empressbunny 5 years ago
great start, steve! I want to see more of your movies, MORE MORE! The acting was superb, and the ending - what a twist!
angenose 5 years ago
Nice twist! I like the location too! Overall it was really well done. Good camera work and editing. Loved the framing and timing. Great job! When is the next installment? Cheers.
drewfromorinj 5 years ago
Great first effort Steve. Loved it. Very funny, if somewhat OTT. A++ Stewart. Great shots Nora. Nice sound Mark. I think it's quite charming. Hopefully I can tone things down a notch on the next one. This one kinda "goes to 11." You can milk a few of the moments for more silences. It would play well at 10 mins, with clear emotional build and more chess match. Starts too high, no room to go. Loved the atmosphere though. Loved the smoking scene. That really works. And the spoon reveal is bang on!
TuBuelar 5 years ago
Great work Steveo!!
replenishedsoul 5 years ago