Wake Up Tomorrow (Original)

Comments/critique on Gband synth/bell slaughter needed :)

Lines,behind,modern understanding
Turn page,paint scene
Wasting time tending machine

Mouth full of questions
Hearts hold up inside
Do ye doubt your own reflections
Imperfections coincide

Time hesitate.
Slow dreams for which we wait.
Hold tongue,find sum
As these times move within..

If ye' wake up tomorrow find your'e
Feeling the sorrow,dont'you worry
Its just pain,take this stillness
And refrain from it

You'll find your place in this
Ever-changing restless harmony
Paths of blue flowing through
Float from me straight to you

And I know that this time
They'll see us through

When we wake up tomorrow,find we
Slowly start to follow,all those
Lights between the lines
Wisdom cares to shine with us

We'll find they climb with us
Till things aren't quite what they seem
Take a hold.Take control.
All I see is Light Beams

This time they'l see us through

© UncleUsurp 2008

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Wake
• Up
• Tomorrow
• Original
• Song
• UncleUsurp
• Space
• folk
• blues

[ockstarray]

nice ambient noises. hey.. your nostrils look like mine. heh. no fair.. they go better with your face. that's creepy.. our noses are like identical. Ohhhhhh... AND great song. I just got a bit sidetracked.

[UncleUsurp]

hehe!thats funny,i'm comin to inspect your nostrils right this instant!

[STOOPIDDITTIES]

Okay, so I wasn't sure if i liked this song or not, but after a few listens I can really appreciate it's individuality. I love it in fact. 5 stars! And get rid of the bells...

[UncleUsurp]

thanks dude,your honesty means alot,will remodel this one :)

[mmcs122]

I really like the song. As for the bells, they sound great right at the beginning, but when they're coming in during the song itself, they don't "flow" together with the song, they seem to "fight" it instead. There's my honest critique. Your guitar work is GREAT, by the way. ;)

[UncleUsurp]

Thank you!Thats what I've been waiting for.A bit of direction.Might fiddle with another take :) Peace

[TheBrooklynRadio]

How did I pass this one up...? Nice one mate. Keep it going.

Peace

[justmusic247]

"Mouth full of questions

Hearts hold up inside

Do ye doubt your own reflections

Imperfections coincide"

orgeous gorgeous gorgeous. faved.

[Weatherhill1]

{{{chirp}}}

[xSaraPacox]

Don't you see? That blue bird is looking at you...

How lucky he is...

eheeh

[erosimpier]

i like the song, and i agree with the comments: at the beggining the bells work, and later they seem to do their own thing. use the more subtle bells that sound more like wind and ignore those chime-y ones...

[yinyangron]

Nice song again, the synth sounds must be your own personal preference, the lyrics are poetically different, you got some real talent, great job, regards Ron

[jonno52]

Really nice work, Surp. I think you should leave the bells in!

[malfattimusic]

hey man cool guitar here.