And to any who thinks on what Ive said as someone whos a know it all.. I do from experiance and I know what Im talking about ask any decent script writer and they'll agree..
Oh.. and last thing might help to have someone help with writing a plot thats why movies are wrote with multiple writers not a single person.. Im a writer myself and I have to give you this "crap" for a comment take it as a positive and think to improove on your work.. otherwise you can take it as a negitive say screw you etc and get nothing from it other then your time wasted and mine for writeing this. I suggest posting a email address for additional writers to contact you.
So.. Major fail on all parts and wheres a tip for ya 1) Research your talking charactors and play off theyre dialog. 2) if your going to write a storyline be persistant and not go along randomly and play as you feel think about what you write and make sure it makes sense. 3) mixing charactors from mutiple comics is normally a bad idea.. you got Dark Horse DC and Marvel charactors.. try limitations on charactors.. I know may seem cool at the moment but its not and might even ruin your plot.
meh Ive seen better but one major flaw... its not marvel that made hellboy its Dark Horse comics.. research before you make yourself an idiot on youtube.. wanna be an idiot on here do something stupid that hurts and record it.. also.. the digital voice for hellboy would have been better for the black green lantern.. also hellboy dosent talk as... intellegent try watching the movies and writeing a proper charactor dialog...
@Checkthecoffie give this guy a break he tries hi best beside his new ones are even better
kylum10001 1 month ago
LOL
LuayRayn 3 months ago
you can't kill a zombie by just take a shot in it's head... YOU HAVE TO CHOP HIS HEAD OFF!!!
burraken1 4 months ago
hellboys not marvel...
theinvaded2012 4 months ago
And to any who thinks on what Ive said as someone whos a know it all.. I do from experiance and I know what Im talking about ask any decent script writer and they'll agree..
Checkthecoffie 4 months ago
Oh.. and last thing might help to have someone help with writing a plot thats why movies are wrote with multiple writers not a single person.. Im a writer myself and I have to give you this "crap" for a comment take it as a positive and think to improove on your work.. otherwise you can take it as a negitive say screw you etc and get nothing from it other then your time wasted and mine for writeing this. I suggest posting a email address for additional writers to contact you.
Checkthecoffie 4 months ago
So.. Major fail on all parts and wheres a tip for ya 1) Research your talking charactors and play off theyre dialog. 2) if your going to write a storyline be persistant and not go along randomly and play as you feel think about what you write and make sure it makes sense. 3) mixing charactors from mutiple comics is normally a bad idea.. you got Dark Horse DC and Marvel charactors.. try limitations on charactors.. I know may seem cool at the moment but its not and might even ruin your plot.
Checkthecoffie 4 months ago
meh Ive seen better but one major flaw... its not marvel that made hellboy its Dark Horse comics.. research before you make yourself an idiot on youtube.. wanna be an idiot on here do something stupid that hurts and record it.. also.. the digital voice for hellboy would have been better for the black green lantern.. also hellboy dosent talk as... intellegent try watching the movies and writeing a proper charactor dialog...
Checkthecoffie 4 months ago
Click my nickname.
DARKMBX 5 months ago
thay sounds like portal2
KingBrock2 5 months ago