Sean’s hook was quite good, but he swung his arms too much during his speech. His speech structure was good, and using many props was also good, but there were not enough props to make everyone try it. The people on the left side table used beverages too much so that the other people on the right side table couldn’t use them as much as they wanted. You’d better have told your audience how much they should pour the beverages into their cups. The interaction with your audience was great as well.
I have to think about the voice, when audiences tried to put the ice in to the cup, it’s very noisy, maybe other audiences can’t hear my voice at that time. I have to avoid that. I think it was better than the last speech, but I still can improve my speech next time.
Sean’s hook was quite good, but he swung his arms too much during his speech. His speech structure was good, and using many props was also good, but there were not enough props to make everyone try it. The people on the left side table used beverages too much so that the other people on the right side table couldn’t use them as much as they wanted. You’d better have told your audience how much they should pour the beverages into their cups. The interaction with your audience was great as well.
s2pinkpetal 1 month ago
I have to think about the voice, when audiences tried to put the ice in to the cup, it’s very noisy, maybe other audiences can’t hear my voice at that time. I have to avoid that. I think it was better than the last speech, but I still can improve my speech next time.
Samlin0912 1 month ago