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Uploaded by on Oct 31, 2009

READ XD
seriously i need to start writting again XD i wrote 10 parts last year and i didn't thought you guys would love this serie which is the first i ever wrote XD
by the way what do you think of my Icon ? I LOVE IT !! XD

Maiden Love Part 8

My roommate Selena, seemed really nervous about the whole favorite situation, which made me ask myself some questions, did something like that happened to a friend of her ?

I was now as yesterday in his majesty room, waiting for him to come in and wash his gorgeous face. When I heard the door I turned around and bowed as I did the previous day *your majesty* but this time I heard a giggle, it was a woman voice, but I didnt dare to look up, it was probably one of the king favorite and I wasnt really curious to know who she was.

*your majesty can I join you tonight ?* she asked. The king walked toward the desk as I poured the water on the plate as yesterday I bowed again before standing up. Thats when I look at the woman, she had long brown hair, and I had to admit that she was beautiful, but did it surprise me ? not really.

*you may join me Elizabeth* he told her with a soft voice before grabbing the towel I was handing him. I grabbed the towel and bowed *good night your majesty* I stood up not looking at his majesty and walked toward the door, but before I could leave I heard the woman *maid ?* I turned around *why dont you respect me ?* she asked, I looked at her confused *pardon me ?* she crossed her arms and turned to look at the king *who does she think she is ?*

I started to be nervous, I didnt know I had to bow, I was scared, I looked down and quickly apologized, scared for my life *I beg for your pardon your highness* I told her still looking down.

I heard the king sigh *you may leave now* I bowed again *your majesty, your highness* I turned around and left.

I walked in my room to find Selena already there sitting on her bed *so how is it ?* she asked me.
I sighed and sat on my bed *horrible*

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  • Just read all the ones you just posted, recently aha!

    Boomboomboom superr writerr xD Im seriously going to call you that from now on!

    You write the BEST series i read!

  • haha thank you :D super writer sounds good XD lol

  • Ahaha yeaah it sounds pretty gooood xD

    But seriously, where do you get all your idea's from? They are always so amazing! :D

  • haha i don't know but when i used it a few years ago whe i had to write a story for my exam my teacher gave me a F XD

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  • Are u kidding me...is ur teacher a retard? or something? this is the best story ever!! ur teacher is ver very stupid!!

  • You had an F for this story?! No way!!! Your teacher must be blind or something...This is awesome!

  • @therealmerock wow.. your teacher is a LOSER.. This is soo good.. Your an awesome writer!

  • I love it.

    I still thought that Demi's new friend would be Miley but yay, it's Selena! :)

  • love it!!

  • wow! i lov it!

    i no u already put up so many bt i stil cant wait 4 the next 1!!! :D

  • Awesome, :). I thought of Camilla too.

    Rofl.

  • i love this story!! =)

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