Payment

A quick movie written and shot in one day, Payment was made to break in my new camera and to get back into the groove of filmmaking after a short lapse. A semi-remake of one of my previous short films, Stolen -- evidently, I couldn't rack my brain for any other ideas the day I wrote this. Enjoy!

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• comedy
• gambling
• humor
• humour
• juvenile
• joke
• movie
• music
• payment
• mobster
• bookie
• gun
• stolen
• car
• dialogue
• short
• film
• video
• low
• no
• budget
• indie
• independent
• DIY
• do
• it
• yourself
• filmmaking
• trash
• grade-z
• psychotronic
• made
• by
• someone
• who
• likes
• the
• following
• programs
• howard
• stern
• opie
• anthony
• SNL
• madtv
• simpsons
• family
• guy
• south
• park
• curb
• your
• enthusiasm
• mst3k
• doesn't
• mean
• you'll
• enjoy
• though

[FastlaneProductions1]

making people say f**k every other word doesn't make a movie good. Just saying.

[cherrera7]

Fair enough. Try "Stolen" or "Phone"; not only is there no profanity, there's little to no dialogue at all! ;)

[bfivel]

6star writting

[cherrera7]

Thanks man!

[badbearwatch]

"You're going to make a joke now,at this time" brilliant!

[cherrera7]

Thanks for watching and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[FastlaneProductions1]

Okay I'll watch those.

[cherrera7]

Thanks!

[k6yardotcom]

Love the ending part. Awesome!

[cherrera7]

Thanks! Pretty much last minute kind of stuff, but I'm glad you liked it!