The Basics (Original Song)

A song I wrote about five minutes before I hit the record button. It probably sucks because it hasn't been refined, but I don't care.

Don't mistake what I have to say
With telling you something to get past today
I've made up my mind, now you must decide
What's getting you through to the next nine divines
Don't mistake what I have to say
With telling you things with which you can relate
I've made up your mind, now I must decide
If your mind's the right proper place I should hide

I've mentioned at times that I'm feeling some pressure
To get back to basics, the basics of life
The basics are fine, but not part of mine
Mine is the one that needs pressure and time
The time to find, the time to grind
The time to grind out the pleasures of life
Don't mistake what I have to say
Don't mistake my kindness...

Category:

Music

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• happyfinesad
• original
• song
• The
• Basics

[TaoTaoWasCute]

I adored the song. Especially the guitar was lovely! ^^

[happyfinesad]

Aw. Thanks dear.

[UnitedStatesOfCanada]

Not bad for a rough draft. I like the intro/outro riff on the guitar.

[happyfinesad]

Yeah. It's very rough. I'll probably make it a bit longer. 1:50 is a little short, I think.

[deanohill1]

dude if u spent asmuch time writing songs, as u do ranting about pointless drivle, ud be pretty dam gud

[EviTheFreak]

Sounds pretty cool. Maybe we should team up for a song someday. ;-)

[Xioustic]

first >.> good song