"Bow Before the Mirror" The FOG (original reggae)

Pls comment.
I wrote this song when I was in psychology graduate school. It was suppose to illustrate histrionic personality disorder (look it up) Also, check out the cool back drop my wife made for me and the cool 92 Gibson SG I picked up off craigslist
Lyrics:

Hey man, did I tell you 'bout my girlfriend
I say, hey man, I got me a pretty girlfriend

When you see her 'cross a smoke filled room
Ah she looks so darn pretty
But when you look into her heart
There is nothing there to greet you

She bows before the mirror
She likes what she can see
She bows before the mirror
She don't look no deeper to see

She say "Do you like my hair do?"
And I say, oh yes ma'am
She say "Do you like my outfit?"
And I say, oh yes ma'am
She say "Am I most beautiful?"
And I say, oh yes ma'am
She say "Will you be my boyfriend?"
And I say, oh yes ma'am

When you see her 'cross a smoke filled room
Ah she looks so darn pretty
But when you look into her heart
There is nothing there to greet you

She bows before the mirror
She likes what she can see
She bows before the mirror
She don't look no deeper to see

She walks something like this:
[drum break]
Chorus

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[MrECLECTICIAN]

Love the Fog Reggae style for sure. Sweet bass line. "Do you like my outfit?" great stuff. And the dance breakdown.. there's so much to love about this one.

[dmio2]

@MrECLECTICIAN Thanks for listening! I like Reggae... makes ya wanna move.

[tanglewoodtw400n]

Magic mam clever funny and groovy A fav the chicks smoking doing something for me lol. Genius man

[dmio2]

@tanglewoodtw400n Thanks for listening!

[losthills]

Sorry I missed this one, Dan. I haven't had a regular internet connection for awhile. You're really great at home recording, man. This sounds GREAT.

[dmio2]

@losthills Thanks for listening! I'm trying to be a little more patient to get things better before I post these days. I'm still jealous of all you live players; I got to give that a try one of these days. I haven't performed live since about 1994.

[dankoch2010]

Great song. Love that reggae feel.

[dmio2]

@mindfulmusic78 Thanks for listening, brother.

[mindfulmusic78]

Ya! Love that groove!

[dmio2]

@kiaweking Thanks for listening, Thomas. You only get authentic island music from Spokane, USA lol