Death's Door

Death's Door
Brandi Lynn Borgia

The hour glass
It tipped
The spirits took their grip
Deaths door opened
And invited your soul

Angels hovered near
Whispers in my ear
"It's time to let go"

You stared through me
Of my denial,
You let me know
I began to shiver
As the room drew cold

Stuck together
In between worlds
Energy swirling
Rising
All our years
About to end this day
I screamed at the spirits
In vain, I tried to hold them at bay

You knew what I struggled to accept
Your spirit touched mine
As toward deaths door,
It crept

No denying it now
Out ran the sands of our time
Deaths door slammed shut
And locked me outside

I'm trying to go on today
Like nothing has occurred
I know that time will heal the pain
At least that's what I've heard

WRITTEN BY: Brandi Lynn Borgia Copyright 2010 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED

Category:

Travel & Events

Tags:

• poetry
• spirit
• death
• poems
• reading
• spiritual

[ShoryoTombo]

I LOVE IT!!!! i must feature this on my channel! You go 'head girl! This is an epic success!!

[AcidEntertainment]

@ShoryoTombo wow, thank you! that means a lot... hard to put up your FEELINGS! =) I miss you sister!

[JoGurlzStuff]

hi brandi...beautifully written and beautifully presented. a nice tribute to those you mentioned. glad to know there are other poets and artists amongst us. :o)

[AcidEntertainment]

@JoGurlzStuff thank you! So you're an artist too! I bet many of us researching the paranormal all. =) Take care and enjoy the day!

[htcsnavybrat]

Outstanding! Really enjoyed the poem and the way you wove them. :)

[AcidEntertainment]

@htcsnavybrat THANK YOU! Very cool of you to take the time to watch and comment! Have a great day!

[celestekittie]

ive always loved that dirge " pray for the dead and they dead will pray for you" i also thought it was messed up that it sounds like the wedding song just in slow motion, a good messed up though

[Thegrinch17]

@fatbitchpinkpegasus And you're a fucking asshole moronic troll!

[fatbitchpinkpegasus]

@Thegrinch17 you really are a SUCK ASS you gender confused TRANSVESTITE

[TheNeuiv]

Amazing video! :P

[TheJaydiddymercer]

@ShoryoTombo what she said. ^^ =D

[TheJaydiddymercer]

@ShoryoTombo what she said.

[Spookypalooza]

Hi Brandi, I know we don't know each other well at all, but I got the idea that you were going through a rough patch a while ago. I just wanted you to know that.... well.... a near total stranger is thinking of you. I'm not really sure that helps, but there it is. :D Have you kept up with Chris? I went over this summer, didn't catch up with Chris unfortunately, but did meet the Compass and Spiral Paranormal crews that Chris is skulking around with now. Great fun!

[00MORDRED]

5*****

very gothic,I love it!!

[activismatters]

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Clever!!!!!!!!!!

[ShoryoTombo]

I can't help but watch this over and over again....lol You need to work with the Booths Brothers and have a collaboration documantary. I bet the both of your collaborated work will be so deeply impacted into the paranormal community as well as the entertaiment realm. Hell, I bet you can do it and I won't be suprise to see it featured either on HBO, A&E, or any major network.

Um... you better give me an autograph before you get too famous...LOL