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Live Like We're Dying: [Ultimate Writer's Contest; ROUND 2]

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READ HERE, PLEASE! IMPORTANT!

Okay, first off ... I have to say ... I'M FREAKING OUT! Not only did I make it into the second round of the Ultimate Writer's Contest, but Shannon (the creator/UntouchableSS27) also announced I was the Round 1 winner, with the "one-shot that stood out the most", aha xD So, as you can see ... I'm truly honored! So thank you SO MUCH! x]

The task for Round 2 was the make a one-shot based on a song, incorporating lyrics to that specific song into the one-shot. I used the song "Live Like We're Dying" by Kris Allen-- my latest obsession, aha. I used Jemi as the couple, because I think they're cute, but they don't really have relevance to the story. For this contest (I will repeat this ALL the time, aha), the WRITING is what matters.

Anyway, the plot is pretty basic. Joe is a free-spirited, child at heart sort of guy with a loving attitude & big heart. He's a goofball & loves to play & to tease. He was arraigned (meaning, he didn't go to jail) after nearly killing a bookstore owner when he & his friends pulled a prank & broke a fire out to the bookstore. Though arraigned, the judge wanted him to do three hundred community service hours. Demi, however, holds grudges. She throws her hate at anyway who passes her way. So basically, Joe is telling her to live life to its fullest; forget those who stood in your way. Move on, & play life easily. The clock isn't going to wait for you. (Yes, that last line I did make up myself, aha.)

LYRICS USED:
-"We've only got 86,400 seconds in the day to turn it all around or throw it all away."
-"You gotta live like we're dying."
-"Every second counts on the clock that's tickin'."

Comments are greatly appreciated. I worked hard on this, & I pray I make it into the next round. I would be deeply honored, aha! :D
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Thank you, & enjoy :)

Comments make me smile, remember that. ALWAYS x]

Tootles ;]
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*Good luck & congrats to all contestants running up in this competition. You guys are all wonderful writers, always remember that! :D
**Yes, I have deleted the comment box on my channel. I found it irritable in a way, aha. So if you'd like to talk, go on Twitter (if you have one) or message me.
***I have a new story coming out ("Nights by the Shore") & I will upload the first chapter after Untouchable, chapter two gets 90+ comments. It needs, I believe, two more comments :)

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PLEASE WRITE "ocean" SOMEWHERE IN YOUR COMMENT IF YOU READ ALL THIS!

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  • what is the font for the text in the vid?

  • @SelenaSweetiexx Calibri. Sorry for the late, reply, btw :)

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  • I loved this! LIKE SO SO MUCH!

  • ocean, this one-shot was very moving stasia :)

  • ocean,

    it was really a moving one-shot, nicely done! xD

  • ocean, this was adorable, Jemi is fascinating and BREATHTAKING!

    <3

  • I LOVE this story it is just sweet and true =)

  • WOW....

    speechless...lol

  • Wonderful plot! Magnificent creativness! ocean :)

  • how do you make your videos?

    like on a website, or windows or summin?xx

  • amazing.

    incredible.

    awesome.

    I'm speechless :]

  • omg your such a good writer!

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