Listen to life (HIP HOP)

Holistic Meditation (Nait) Ft Soul Architect (Nick)

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Classic
• Rap-
• the
• subculture
• Of
• Hip-Hop

[thakaeng]

Nice one there. Keep it up

[cooka06]

@thakaeng

much love brotha thank you for listening 

[artrenai]

when I say 0:20 - 0:32 i mean thats where you need to work on your rise and falls. Honestly listening to the song over and over it grows on you:-)

[artrenai]

-4- Why is this all important? Because when you normally talk your voice rises and falls..it fluctuates not only dependent on the words you say but also your intent behind the words. In song, its an exaggeration of this character Phenomenon. More importantly because when people are listening to music they cant see body language so you have to kind of make up for that... so they can see with their ears... This sounds great , my dude keep up the good work :-) remember these are only opinions :-)

[artrenai]

... words death and breath should sound like the words. best way to pull that off... ---3-s an over-exaggerated whisper. The hook... Work on it. the rise and falls aren't even alternate the way say hip way it sounds now is 1,2,2,2... The second rapper is killing it. I can hear his character. one of the reasons is his timing... he knows when to attack a note and when not too. when to elongate and when not to and finally the rise and fall.....

[artrenai]

_2_......but if you do it too much, it takes away it's effect. becomes redundant. sounds sophomoric so just watch it. When you say flow and in the background you hear that ohhh!... 0:45 needs to sound realistic.... you know how your friends would say it if you got dissed or something or something caught them off guard lol thats how its suppose to sound. Remember you are creating an environment. That your audience is supposed to be see through their ears.) same thing with the background Whew!!

[artrenai]

sorry finally getting to it, ending week of research is always crazy so here goes... I took notes. First I would like to say wow this is some improvement :-). Also,The second rapper is crazy good. ( 0:20 - 0:32 ). work on your rise and fall. I think when you say love- rise that note then next word drop. when i say it gets choppy, I mean you end a note and chop it off too hard its not flowing into the next word of lyrics. experiment with that. Sometimes its okay to do that...