Jin's 2010 Hip Hop Census Mixtape-16 yr old: T-vaj Lyrically Written aka Poetic tonE

this is my entry for Jin's contest entitled: "Surviving These Times"
i'm 16 yrs old n i go by the name of:
T-vaj Lyrically Written aka Poetic tonE
myspace.com/tvajlyricallywritten

Verse:
Faced with the decision,
to kill everyone with a hundred percent precision,
Or join these lyrical sessions,
I'm learning from God's lessons,
So i'm on this mission,
but I'm being brought up forth and being attacked,
for my very own fact,
that I'm a Gook and somehow I chose to rap,
cuz everyone believes that rap was made for blacks,
they proclaim, "hey gook, go cook me some food,
Isn't that wat the rest of you Gooks always do?",
these times are getting restless,
I'm spittin and now I'm getting breathless,
my anger is really getting tempted,
my face is where all my struggles are imprinted,
Hip Hop and Rap shouldn't become racist,
I'm reppin Hip Hop, so I'm standing up to face this,
I'm enjoying every minute that I do breathe,
I'm proud to be a Gook, cuz we always succeed,
even though, Hip HOp and Rap can be deceiving,
i'm always perceiving,
it won't break me down cuz I'm always believing,
it won't make me frown cuz I'm always acheiving,
bringing Hip Hop to a much greater height,
doesn't really matter if i lose one fight,
i'm no lyricist, i'm no Emcee
I'm just Poet, Hip Hop and Rap is Poetry,
waiting for my time to shine, spur up and breathe,
this is the time while I'm tip-toeing on my feet,
until a brighter day scretes,,
I'll always be GOOKIN these beats,
I'm just another, G-double O-k,
now i'ma let Jin take it away,

Chorus (4x's):
I'm living this life,
surviving these times,
I'm trying to live right,
fighting back with my rhymes,

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Jin
• Hip
• Hop
• Census
• Rap
• Hmong
• Lyrical
• Poet
• Poetry
• T-vaj

[soggylocc]

u is bull shit like jin..,..quit ur shit u anit hip hop...acciedentily got on this bull shit page....dont make us look stupid...u anit street just like jin...keep taking ur ass to chruch...cuz u no u scared..

[hmoobvboi]

@soggylocc ey you talk more shit yourself bruh...you are shit yourself too...step yo game up before you come talking shit on real music that you can't understand...open your slanted ass eyes to see what you can't see...that you can't fade me Gook...I don't see your weak ass doing what I do...you can't step to my level Gook...and yeah I'll talk my church stuff bruh...unlike you at least I have a place to belong...and you don't...go back to flipping my hamburgers, if you even have a job...

[Bv22705]

niceee ay what instrumental is this

[hmoobvboi]

@Bv22705 it's Nas-Surviving the times

[143yaknow]

this is illlllllll styll

[SETampaBest16]

thas sum pretty good lyrix sON! keep it up cuH

[koflight]

good message, this is hiphop

[hmoobvboi]

@christisamust7 ahah koo koo..ur stuff was dope bro keep it up!! ONE LOVE!! -Poetic tonE

[christisamust7]

@hmoobvboi yeah Syn is my name i forgot i was in this account..peace bro.

[hmoobvboi]

@christisamust7 thnxz for tha view n comment it's really appreciated..is the on by Syn urs??

[christisamust7]

tight stuff man, check mine out peace

[MsImaginAsian]

good shit tony keep up the good work :D

[ReytheCoolestLoser]

Not bad, keep doing your thing.

[hmoobvboi]

@yangoose thnxz bro mad love to ya man!

[yangoose]

good shit bro nice stuff man

-Bruce

[plasticband]

yeahh..dats it..!!!

[hmoobvboi]

@xxurplaymatexx

thnxz for tha listen G

i really appreciate it :]

-Poetic tonE

[hmoobvboi]

@916muaboi

thnxz for tha view n listen brah

much love!

keep doing ya thang!

Poetic tonE

[916muaboi]

damn this shit is hella raw

[xxurplaymatexx]

haha.

good job hmong boy.

hahaha.

[str8outtafrisko]

not bad...beat is classic!

[hmoobvboi]

@fearlessmuaythai

ahah i feel ya..but can't change who we are

so mite as well embrace it ahh

but i definitely understand your point :]

thnxz alot for hearing me out n commenting

ONE LOVE!

-Poetic tonE

[fearlessmuaythai]

you got flow but lets not be like blacks and call are selves racist names but get mad when other ppl call us the same thing we say to are selves dont want a white boi to call me his gook haha

[hmoobvboi]

ahah dang wow never knew anyone wuld drop tacks like me ahah but it's all gewd

well i'm proud to be a gook cuz that's wat i am

i embrace wat i am...not erase wat i am...

a gook is like a nigga

we can share the same views, thoughts, n ideas

-Poetic tonE

[Harvardization]

are u a mind reader? hahha damn, we share the same view. i was about to rap over this instrumental..

good one brother, but why are you proud to be a gook?