Emerse Me In September

A somber, yet lovely poem by Poet & JPiC Forum Member (http://JPiCForum.info) Erik Estabrook. Webmistress Jacquii Cooke recites the poem: Emerse Me In September. Slideshow produced by Jacquii as well...

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• poetry
• poem
• september
• erik
• estabrook
• jacquii
• cooke
• poetic
• video-poem
• recital
• artistic
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[TheNextSimonC]

FIRST COMMENT. THE WORDS ARE OK(?) BUT IT IS BORING AND MAKES ME WANNA SLEEP. GET SOME SWAG IN IT AND IT'LL BE DECENT. wHATS UP WITH THE VID?

[PoetJC]

@TheNextSimonC --- "Get some swag in it" -- What a stupid comment. Thanks for the laugh LOL

[TheNextSimonC]

@scavengermouseful

thanks

[scavengermouseful]

@TheNextSimonC truthfully I've been told I don't understand poetry by novices,

its something everyones been told before, I'll try harder next time if you try not to sound insulting, I appreciate you commenting and the fact that you thought it was "okay"

[TheNextSimonC]

@scavengermouseful

but u said i dont understand what art is so for me that is VERY similar. well next time i think you should not jump to conclusions about how much a person knows about art.

thanks for leting me have a decent convo for once.

[scavengermouseful]

@TheNextSimonC I'm not syaing you don't know what art is, I just don't understand how someone could know art and honestly call an art piece boring, you made a point of noting it was the first comment there was actually 6 previous comments that were all stupid and two good comments that were somehow deleted I guess, im not trying to say you don't understand art but your comment made it seem you had no grasp of art,

thanks for commenting

[TheNextSimonC]

@scavengermouseful

dont talk to me about art i KNOW arti did read the words that's why i said it was ok. and not as much people like deaf jam poets as other%2

[scavengermouseful]

maybe you just don't understand the art of it, Im not here to give you bubble gum and fucking lollipops, it doesn't need swag did you read the lyrics its about what its about, I could really go all grand about how fun it is to die, you need to read things you understand pop-up books and def jam poets because that shit is what people like, don;t give me a poor comment without being able to make some kind of poetic point of contention, you are officially totally oblivious to intellegence