Monologue- "Fences" -Jacquiria
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Great Job!
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She seemed like she wanted to laugh at times I couldn't even take her serious in this monologue
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Im a little late viewing this video, however i am an actress as well, i will be grad inb May with a bachelors in Theater Acting and one thing i would suggest is to NEVER START A PIECE OFF YELLOWING OR SCREAMING. I was taught when you do that then you have nowhere to emotional go with the piece. I would try starting the piece off calmer and allow the emotional anger to build up through the text. Loose some of the hand gesture, physically embody the character. But i see great potential!!
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You have the tools but your execution needs fine tuning. It was a fine monologue, but what's important to remember here is that it has to be real to you in order for it to be real to the audience. When I looked at your face, you were deadpan. I saw someone delivering memorized lines. Not Rose talking to Troy. If I were just listening to this piece and not watching, it sounded pretty good, but even that could use some readjustment. Find new places for those pauses and make the intent make sense.
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If you begin high, you have no where to work towards. I didn't have the oppurtunity to view this video in its entirety, but as a note: A monologue must capture the actors range in a short time frame.
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wow omg great Acting.
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I think you're the best one I've seen on here so far. :] Amazing!
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wow. well I think you did a great job. It was really believable. keep it up
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I actually performed this piece. You used to much hand motion and not enough physical body movement. But you're not actually doing it in the play so, good job girl. Lol
NO NO NO NO! You were not connected at all in this piece...the beginning was HORRIBLE! You began to connect to some things in the middle, but lost it! If you can step out of a monologue, with that caliber, and just say scene and smile?? Then you know you weren't connected...do more work and analyze the character and what shes going through in this brilliant play by August Wilson. When you do that and focus on it, then maybe it will be better
clinsey 3 years ago 9
Slowwwwwwwwwwwwww down... 18 years we are talking about here... I think that rose was more disappointed than angry. try redoing the scene.
Kennsb 1 year ago 3