The Good Left Undone
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great job i liked the secnes, this one is the best by all of the other ones outhere on youtube you should make more rise against music videos
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And not just scene changes, but the actual action in the video as well.
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Yeah. I was having a bit of a brain fart, so I didn't exactly know how to express that clearly.
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This is awesome as man!
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That was actually very enjoyable and entertaining. One of the best of these, ehm, types of videos I've seen, well done guys :)
neeson360 2 years ago
Thank you. Much appreciated.
HazardSFGF 2 years ago
I know that this critique is pretty much two years late, but whatever. I liked it, man. It told the story pretty well and told it in a coherent fashion. However, the lip syncing was a bit dodgy at points, and the few angles of you playing guitar got a little bit stale after a while.
Also, while you did a great job matching the video with the lyrics, I feel that you could have done a better job of matching the video percussively, if that makes any sense.
Spaztar 2 years ago
thank you pat, andheart.
I am very well aware of how stale the singing and guitar gets. I threw them in hastily trying to get the video finished because I didn't have a lot time to submit the video for the contest. However, I'm not as familiar with this percussive idea. Do you mean rhythmically matching scene changes to the song?
HazardSFGF 2 years ago
Incredible, men. That's so good. congratulations =)
Cirhian 2 years ago
thank you!
HazardSFGF 2 years ago