The Good Left Undone

I made this during my sophomore year of high school (2007) for rise against's video contest. I realise that a lot of the guitar playing gets pretty dry, but I did the best I could in the available time I had. Tell me what you think.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• rise
• against
• the
• good
• left
• undone
• contest
• hazard

[neeson360]

That was actually very enjoyable and entertaining. One of the best of these, ehm, types of videos I've seen, well done guys :)

[HazardSFGF]

Thank you. Much appreciated.

[Spaztar]

I know that this critique is pretty much two years late, but whatever. I liked it, man. It told the story pretty well and told it in a coherent fashion. However, the lip syncing was a bit dodgy at points, and the few angles of you playing guitar got a little bit stale after a while.

Also, while you did a great job matching the video with the lyrics, I feel that you could have done a better job of matching the video percussively, if that makes any sense.

[HazardSFGF]

thank you pat, andheart.

I am very well aware of how stale the singing and guitar gets. I threw them in hastily trying to get the video finished because I didn't have a lot time to submit the video for the contest. However, I'm not as familiar with this percussive idea. Do you mean rhythmically matching scene changes to the song?

[Cirhian]

Incredible, men. That's so good. congratulations =)

[HazardSFGF]

thank you!

[rockette27]

great job i liked the secnes, this one is the best by all of the other ones outhere on youtube you should make more rise against music videos

[Spaztar]

And not just scene changes, but the actual action in the video as well.

[Spaztar]

Yeah. I was having a bit of a brain fart, so I didn't exactly know how to express that clearly.

[MVlog9]

This is awesome as man!