How to Edit Your Writing : Examples of Poor Word Choice
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Hi, I'm from ukproofreading,org and those letters still sounded pretty bad. For example, she used because twice in the same sentence, it may make sense, but its still not the impression you want to be giving across when applying for something.
QuickPala 1 year ago
Very good--but it should be "may I call you," not "can I" to be proper formal English.
NancyPeske1 1 year ago
I'm learning lots from you how to edit your writing series :)
ideagirlconsulting 2 years ago
Better sentence? It's horrible. She uses "because" twice and there's no commas in it.
bongolongo 2 years ago
Sorry, but it's not "trolling" but "trawling" that you meant in the "bad" example.
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