Season 3 (Trap #6)
THE STORY
Like many other women, Alyssa is a single mother raising a child named Nicholas, but Alyssa feels life has been unfair with her more than to any other person.Suffering day and night her misery, alyssa sends Nicholas to a program at her local church which helps with his education and future, Father Sebastian is the head of this program, but little did Alyssa know, sebatian hides a side of him that no one knows, beneath his cassock lies a child molester, his latest victim?, Nicholas.
Jigsaw decides to put a stop to this epidemic and takes action kidnapping Sebastian in his sleep, later Alyssa is kidnapped as well, Jigsaw sees the need to open Alyssa's eyes revealing her what a terrible mother she's been to little Nicholas.
THE TRAP
The game takes place in the basement of an old burned down church, Alyssa wakes up in a chair and finds Sebastian lying in a crucifix, there's six spears in the room and six markings in Sebastian's body, beneath each marking is a hole in the crucifix that will allow each spear to make contact with a switch, Alyssa must insert all six spears through Sebastian's body in order to retrieve the key that will unlock her harness holding the blade that will slice her throat if she fails the game, the key is located inside a bullet proof showcase, the showcase has six locks which are conected to the six switches underneath the crucifix, there's also four nail bombs in each corner of the room, if Alyssa tries to remove her harness or if for some reason the harness gets shaken alot, a signal will set the bombs off ending the game instantly.
BILLY
Hello Alyssa, I want to play a game, as a single mother you see life in a different perspective than most people do, but instead of embracing the blessings you have, you curse life for being rough on you when you should be with the people who love you, like your son.Have you ever wonder what caused your son's illness Alyssa?, your beloved trusted Father Sebastian is the cause of your son's disease.Nine months ago he was diagnose with HIV, and now he has infected your son with this same disease, he's fighting for his life with only six years of age, are you surprised Alyssa?.There's a blade attached to your harness pointing straight at your throat, if you want to live all you have to do is take the six spears behind you and insert them through Sebastian's body, ther's six markings on his body, all six are perfectly aligned with a switch underneath the crucifix that will unlock the showcase with the key to remove your harness, there's four nailbomds surrounding you, if you try to remove your harness, a signal will set them all off, also the glass in the showcase is bullet proof, so if I were you I wouldn't waste time trying to brake it, you have four minutes, let the game begin.
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@UkShuffling I'm pretty sure that's a one. I've seen those, they look like sevens.
NinjaBacon123321 1 month ago
@NinjaBacon123321 Exactly, that's a one, but I guess a lot of people are not very familiar with that font
JLGRproductions 1 month ago
the story isn't creative. there isn't a twist. won't it be better if the priest knew who molested the child maybe? again look at the facts. A pedophile priest with HIV (which is by the way is totally manageable virus if treated right), a six yr old who is raped by said priest (never mind how child says nothing), and one clueless mom who isnt hiv positive and doesnt ask questions about how her child contracted virus and never seems to ask for a rape kit?
ToDallasFromBoston 1 month ago
@ToDallasFromBoston The problem is you my friend, because obviously you don't pay attention. (Alyssa is a bad mother, I don't get where you're getting that it could be better if Sebastian knew about the molester, Dude SEBASTIAN is the molester.
JLGRproductions 1 month ago
you misunderstood what i said. I clearly understand that Alyssa was the "bad mother" and that the priest was the molester. I suggested as a better motif to create conflict between the two: if the priest know who the molester was (not him) but was bound not to reveal it (confessional), what lengths would mom go to get the answer? However, it still doesn't make up for how the plot itself can still be better. You art and script as is very beautiful. I watched to the end. says alot.
ToDallasFromBoston 1 month ago
@ToDallasFromBoston This was my first trap after the Air Fan Trap Trilogy and I do see that I could've done a much better job, specially with the acting, but it was one of my first ones so its ok. I have plans to maybe some day remake Air Fan Trap, Spine Trap, Hatchet Trap and this one, but I don't know yet.
JLGRproductions 1 month ago