Oh God...

This is a poem I thought of. tell me what you think.

the song in it is

Logan - bon om def

Here are the lyrics...
Oh God...

Oh God why do I have these overprotective, annoying parents?
Why do I have to feel for others, when none of them even cares?
Why did You have to devise all this evil and hatred?

Oh God why do I have to have a car that is so beat up?
Why do I have to always be the different and individual in a group?
Why did You have to make the opposite sex so confusing?

Oh God why do I always get the cheaper quality of products?
Why do I have to think about all of this?
Why did You give us just enough to comprehend, but not enough to understand why?

Oh God, now I know why You have created me.

for people who like to analyze here is how i made the poem. the first lines of the stanzas are me nagging about something materialistic then it goes into self-awareness and finally ends in a direct question to God.

more comments... I never wrote His name so openly, but this poem is different.

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[Angeldeluz1970]

Beautiful poem. Childlike and innocent.

But please, feel for those who demonstrate that they don't give a damn about you. Teach them compassion and love. In this you become part of the solution instead of perpetuating the compassionless indifference that infects humanity as a cancer.

I don't know you, but I'd risk my own life in a heartbeat to preserve yours. There are many like me out there in the world. Believe this.

Again, nice poem. Your sincerity is crystal clear. Thanks. ~Rob

[aghachi]

hey man sorry i didnt reply earlier to this comment, stupid youtube never updated me on this video being commented on.

yes i do believe what you say, by the amount of intellect in your comments.

i must say your comments very much warmed my heart, and i am talking literately, not figuratively, i felt my chest get warm.

and for that i thank you very deeply. :)

[Darroth]

porque há nenhum som?

[aghachi]

sorry I don't understand your language...

[Angeldeluz1970]

Beautiful questions, childlike and innocent. Please care for others who demonstrate that they don't give a damn about you, though. Teach them what is is to love. Thus you become part of the solution instead of perpetuating the problem of compassionless indifference that consumes humanity as a cancer.

I don't know you, but I'd risk my own life in a heartbeat to protect yours. :-)

[princeofpersia]

Nice. I liked it.

[jberookhim]

johnny i like it...