Short Film: DRIP - LukeBlairFilms
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Read your feedback, I say your film lacks nothing but to enter it into the BOFF on BIGSTAR.tv!!! They have a 5 minute or less any genre accepted worth 50 GRAND!!! I;ll inbox you the link.
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I know what framing is to me framing and blocking walk hand and hand. but now that a look a little closer I see what you mean in this short.
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first of all not tight enough is framing not blocking and the blocking was bad because alot of the times when a character would talk another character would be covering him and we wouldnt see the chracter who was speaking.
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As far as blocking goes the only thing I see wrong is the blocks were not tight enough
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Story Lacks immensely.
Blocking could have been WAY better
Music was only ok
Good fight scene
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It's like a scene from a full-length movie. No beginning, no end... just a middle. Which is fine, actually...
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Good shorts...keep up the good work
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whats was the point? i don't understand
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