The Package
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Two Spoiledby jef8psp1,204 views- 7:56
Biggest Brotherby jef8psp252 views
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Bad Applesby jef8psp266 views
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Sleepersby jef8psp423 views
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The Packageby gallomallet1,684 views
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Dream Jobby jef8psp298 views
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A Fistory of Violenceby Dellavision524 views
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Lactose Intoleranceby SporkFilms12,521 views
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The Happeningby mentlmunke991 views
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John Robert & The Two Town Taleby brofski302 views
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Slowpokeby spinninggrave276 views
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The Lone Staplerby glowInTehDark418 views
I can't think of a better hook than 2 people found dead in an apt. with no explanation as to why. Also, I think this short is pretty damn polished especially considering how many I have seen from these weekend challanges. The music is killer, the script has a bookend for God's sake and I think this Den guy is just jealous he didn't make it.
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soleah38 5 years ago
Not a lot of polish on these short time frame Projects. Considering that I still think it needed more of a hook to draw us into the characters and plot, but what can you do with 8 mins. Don't know how I would come up with anything small enough with the right punch to it.
But you gotta try, and then you learn. Very envious Jef. thanks for sharing your work -Den
Cyberphin 5 years ago