DPTAS EP1

Desert Punk:
The Abridged Series - Episode One: Holy Crap!

So I finally finished the first episode... and its not all that funny.
However, I used a fairly old script and tried to revise it.

The next episode will take allot less time and most likely more funny (Due to that I would be using newer material)
Actors:
JFOtaku7810 - Generic British Father
Nowacking - Little Girl, Pickles
CommanderFluffy - Everyone else

The opening was done by JFOtaku7810

Audio Used:
Rammstein - Feuer Frei
Skittles N' Bits - Koopa Joke
Were gonna need a montage - Matt Stone & Trey Parker

-----DISCLAIMER-----
I do not own Desert Punk (Sunabozu)
Desert Punk is owned by Takayuki Inagaki, Gonzo, Madman Entertainment, FUNimation Entertainment, Mainichi Broadcasting System & Starz Edge. This is a fan-made parody nothing more nothing less. Please support the official release.

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[MasterOuiukiske]

Man, my editing sucks.

I need to work on editing more than a few hours ._."

[Chloroformal1229]

I have one word for your sorry excuse for an abridged series: FAIL!!!! I do have a suggestion though so you don't go through life being a complete loser. DESERT PUNK DOES NOT, HAS NOT,AND WILL NOT EVER NEED AN ABRIDGED SERIES!!!!!!!!!! The point of abridged series is to make a NON-funny anime fucking hillarious. Which you failed miserably at. So please, DEAR GOD PLEASE, NEVER MAKE AN ABRIDGED SERIES AGAIN FOR DESERT PUNK!!!! Stick to something like D.N. Angel or Chobitts or something like that.

[MasterOuiukiske]

Ahh... You know. I just realized that you suggested Chobits... I did think about that... but meh.

[divinecupid]

@MasterOuiukiske shoulda used the gunshot song for the op theme

[MegamanAbridged]

@Chloroformal1229 well it was his choice to write it the way he wrote it. The point with abridging is to do it your own way, aside from following the standard take the plot and condense it into under 10 minutes with comedy rule, it's pretty much open to anything

[Chloroformal1229]

@MegamanAbridged That may be true but what's the point if the jokes you are making are already being made in the actual anime. What I was saying is that Desert Punk's comedy style is similar to the style of comedy used in the abridged series. So why even bother?

[MegamanAbridged]

@Chloroformal1229 you sir don't know anything about abridged series, ANYTHING can be abridged, NOTHING IS SAFE and I mean NOTHING

[MasterOuiukiske]

Well, thank you.

[AkitoHayama01]

i think you woud do an ok job

[MasterOuiukiske]

Yes, but that wasn't my point.

At least *I'M NOT* doing FLCL Abridged.

(It would suck if I did it)

[AkitoHayama01]

i acutally seen a FLCL abridged series and i thoughis was pretty good its by lizzie dog productions