Haunted Mansion ep. 1 //Arrival//

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My 1st episode yay!

okay! their ages if it's important at all lol
selena miley & nick-16
demi-17
joe & taylor- 18
kevin- 20
bella & ashley- 19


Haunted Mansion ep. 1
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The day after the letter arrived for Selena, Selena, Demi, & Bella went to the mansion.

Selena, Demi & Bella arrive at the doorstep.

Demi: Where is the welcoming committee? (laughs)
Bella: This place gives me the creeps
Selena: Well it's free & the closest we're getting to a vacation

Selena, Demi & Bella hear voices coming toward them.

Demi: I guess the welcoming committee is coming & they sound cute!
Selena & Bella: (Stare at Demi) Welcoming committee, really? (shake their heads in embarrassment)
Bella: What are we gonna do about this one? (Looks at Selena & giggles)

Nick, Joe & Kevin arrive. Demi walks up to them.

Demi: So this is your mansion?
Joe: Nope, we were just gonna ask you guys the samething
Demi: Oh
Selena: You guys were invited too
Nick: I was & then I took my brothers along
Selena: Oh me too (Waves her letter) only I took my bestfriends
Nick:(Smiles) Thats cool
Selena: (Smiles & blushes) Yeah...

The doors to the mansion suddenly open wide with a creeky noises.

Bella: I told you guys this place is creepy
Kevin: The doors just need an oiling or something
Bella: Not the noise! the door opened up... "automatically"!
Selena: (Starts to walk into the mansion) Maybe their automatic doors
Bella: If they were they would have opened along time ago!
Selena: Maybe since their old... they're slow, don't be so negative okay!

Everyone else but Demi & Joe walk in. Demi notices they are hugging eachother in fright.

Demi: (Steps back fast) Oh... uh.... um... (says nervously)
Joe: (Points to the mansion & quickly says) We-should-go-in
Demi: Yeah (Answers quickly)

Joe & Demi follow behind Bella & Kevin. Selena looks around stunned at the gorgeous mansion.

Selena: Wow... it's so...
Demi: (yelled) Big! (echos throughout the room)
Selena: Beautiful! (Looks at Demi gritting her teeth)

A Mysterious man comes out of a dark hallway coming toward them.



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okay please tell me if you like it!!
& if it's good!!
& if there is anything wrong that i can change!
or if you like something or don't!
please and thanks guys love ya!

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  • @nightvein16 the story is in the description box :)

  • am i missing something? they were just pictures. reading? whats there to reaD? im confused. its good though!

  • best series i ever read. my 3rd time reading it all over again <3

  • cool!!! but next time try to use less stars ok? but still, its a great story1 cant wait to see episode 2

  • Omg Goosebumps theme! I automatically love it now!!

  • @sassystanjy Thanks?

  • this is so madddddddddddddddddddddddddddd­dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd­dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd­ddd big up the person who wrote this

  • wait is that the goosebumps theme. i love that series

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  • awesome awesome totally

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