Self Existence

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Michael Zethner playing a song that I wrote in about 4 hours and recorded after. Its a little rough, but I enjoyed it.

This song has a story behind it incase anyone was interested: The song starts off with an introduction which is just those first couple of chords (really soft intro) The setting is a poor town where people are losing there houses and property. Where people can't pay for food or rent. People are losing their lives from poverty. The only job is to work in the mine. (0:00 - 0:17)

The Prayer:
The song really begins with the boys Prayer. He is young and is praying for god to help him. God tells him to go into the wild where he will be givin a vision. (0:18-0:34)

Judgment Call:
The boy argues with his guardians and towns people. Everyone doubts him. He tries to explain his stories, but they don't believe him. His family needed him to work in the mines, but he knew that this would save the whole town. (0:34-1:10)

Desperation:
Now the Boy is in the wilderness, alone and desperiate. He needs to find this answer that he has longed for. That God has promised. He dives deeper into his mind and prays to the point where he sees something. (1:11-2:10)

This Vision:
He sees this vision of the future, it was what he prayed for, what he wanted. All of the poverty was fixed and everyone he loved was healthy and happy. (2:10-2:37)

But how:
The boy "prays" to god and asks how he can accomplish this. The boy is tired and thirsty for an answer. When god does not respond he has figured he had gotten his answer. (2:38-2:54)

The Boy Returns:
When he tells the Towns people that he had the vision they obvious don't believe him. The boy expected as much and had been working on words to persuade them. He tells them that in the near Future all of their problems will be solved. The solution to all of our problems will come to us in time and untill then we should all remain idle. (2:54-329)

The Virusion:
The towns people fight with him but in the end he manages to convice them. He tells them it is the word of God. They all believe in the Vision and it spreads like a virus.... (3:29-4:01)

The Catch:
but Prosperity never comes. For the First week they wonder
for the next month they regret. It was to late. It turned out that there was enough gold buried in those mines to save the whole town. No one ever got to it.. . . (4:01-End)

The boy never relied on himself to save his own existence

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Michael
• Zethner
• Self
• Existance
• Acoustic
• Indie
• Guitar

[YankeeCat]

So good... o_o

[Zethyguitarist]

lol thanks, this is so old every time I watch it I can't stop thinking how long my hair was XD

[YankeeCat]

@Zethyguitarist well not to be creepy...but I think your new hair really suits you too, just don't cut it all off xD

[Zethyguitarist]

lol no that's not creepy, but yeah I look terrible with really short hair, plus I play "Metal" ... I think... so I have to have long hair

[GermanGTD65]

OMFG! you Awesome!

[Zethyguitarist]

thanks :)

[pyreshadow]

wow.. that story is deep... i know this question is kinda personal, and you dont have to answer, but ur story had alotta religious reference in it, and now u got me curious.. like what do u believe as far as religion? (watch.. this is where a whole line of conflict is gonna start, and everyone will criticize me on starting a religious thread... but you dont have to answer lol)

[tehhshoes]

Make more songs >: (

[RenoOfAkatsuki]

My hair used to be long too. I understand that. Lol. I miss it everyday. Which, is why i am growing it again!

[draydan]

Dude you should definatly record this one with something better, like to only hear the guitar, and have a better sound + put it available for download somewhere i,d even pay to download that song if its necessary cause i love it.

[adpedotto]

your a guitartist



[eagerbeavers1130]

I love your guitar

[eagerbeavers1130]

gosh this is so good!! I wished that I could download it because I would listen to it all time time !:)

[josh1995261]

Amazing!!!!!!!! Godly

[DeadlyApocalipSiS]

Damn! you're pretty damn good man you should rec your songs with all missing instruments :D keep on

[eagerbeavers1130]

wooooh you are TALENTED! i think you will go really far with your guitar playing so keep it up!! :D

[IInventedIrony]

Sounds like a mix between Tool and SoaD. It sounds wicked dude!

[beeper182]

You deserve so much more recognition than you currently have, you obviously know more about song writing than quite a few others in the industry. You sir, have talent, and I hope you go far with it.