Shindo - Episode 1
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It looks like a good plot, but PLEASE get rid of the muted color.
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"It grabbed him... then it threw him up... it stared at me for a few seconds... then i became unconscious."
i know this part was supposed to be serious, but the slow and dull of that part just made me laugh. It can stay as it was, but the time between the words shud be increased.
Maybe done like so: "It grabbed him, threw him up, then stared at me for a few seconds... When it did that, i suddenly became unconscious."
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i loved it!!! but i agree with the other guy...get rid of muted colors.wat i mean is to make the pics lighter.just a lil plz.
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I actually like the muted color. D:
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This was the best machinima I have ever seen. It was well made throughout the whole episode. Am I the only one who liked the voice acting? I thought it was pretty good, WAY better then any other voice acting machinimas. This deserves a ten out of five. But please make more!! I really enjoyed it!!!
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this didn't suck, but the voice acting was... meh. Snake was perfectly casted, though. He just needs to work on pacing, and where he pauses when he says his lines
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Wow this is amazing i luv it and im only up to the beginning ;)
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voice acting and dialogue need work, but I love it otherwise :)
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This is sooo awesome :OO
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Who does Snake's voice???
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Did you cast David Hayter or What?
The Snake voice sounds real!
Do you know anything about Project SA? It's one of the only things that could make this even more epic.
Theespada13 2 years ago
Too bad they didn't have that when I made this. haha
LuigiBroBrawl 2 years ago
This series is already affecting so many machinimators. Zeburon, TheDarkSide, and admittedly, Phantom are all using adopted elements from this machinima.
You've made your mark, LBB. Bravo.
BlackAndWhite9999 2 years ago 10
Oh wow I haven't seen this comment.
Thank you so much! Thank you! Haha that really means a lot. I appreciate it.
LuigiBroBrawl 2 years ago
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This was awful, sorry :(
captainkeeeta 2 years ago
I agree, I got the message a while ago, I am remaking it, now if you'll excuse me.
LuigiBroBrawl 2 years ago