I thought your use of sound was done well thats what I think drove your film. I would have liked to see it be longer for you could build up the story and keep us interested. good try and keep it up.
ummm I dont get it, the pacing of the film was good, it was slow and I was waiting for it to pick up and lead to somekind of intense climax AND resolution, but it didn't. the end was not shocking to me, it was more confusing than anything. I am completley lost when it comes to the story of the film. The asthetics were ok, but you should concentrate on getting your audiences attention first then giving them a some kind of resolution.
story still ok...no bad
sanchai25 5 years ago
I thought your use of sound was done well thats what I think drove your film. I would have liked to see it be longer for you could build up the story and keep us interested. good try and keep it up.
SniperRed 5 years ago
ummm I dont get it, the pacing of the film was good, it was slow and I was waiting for it to pick up and lead to somekind of intense climax AND resolution, but it didn't. the end was not shocking to me, it was more confusing than anything. I am completley lost when it comes to the story of the film. The asthetics were ok, but you should concentrate on getting your audiences attention first then giving them a some kind of resolution.
SniperRed 5 years ago
wierd...
chastine0023 5 years ago