On the issue of "swaying." It's good, but not when you sway to sway, or sway with the beat. Move with the music. Example- you have an up bow and are increasing the volume, if you do it properly, your body should naturally move as weight is transfered.
Vibrado could make that quite a lovely piece. Get a little wiggle in there and it could actually make a big difference! I can't really see your bowhand very well, but, I suspect it is quite tense. Loosten it up and it will also help. Perhaps play with your pinking sticking out from the bow, yes, it will look wierd, but will help you lossten the wrist tremendously.
Don't listen to ComradeLance. If you sway then you sway if you try and stop your self from swaying then you won't enjoy the music and thats what it's all about. Just play the music and enjoy. Very well played
it would probably have been better couple of years later :p
YoyoSerial 5 years ago
On the issue of "swaying." It's good, but not when you sway to sway, or sway with the beat. Move with the music. Example- you have an up bow and are increasing the volume, if you do it properly, your body should naturally move as weight is transfered.
porthousevike07 5 years ago
Vibrado could make that quite a lovely piece. Get a little wiggle in there and it could actually make a big difference! I can't really see your bowhand very well, but, I suspect it is quite tense. Loosten it up and it will also help. Perhaps play with your pinking sticking out from the bow, yes, it will look wierd, but will help you lossten the wrist tremendously.
porthousevike07 5 years ago
Yes!!!
vatarosan 5 years ago
that was pretty good but havent u learnt vibrado yet?
wowofanboy 5 years ago
violin is such a hard instrument!
Anyways it was definetly not bad, but it sounds a little...dry
I guess more feeling would be nice. I play violin too but sometimes it's hard for me to get the right sound -_-
Ashogo 5 years ago
Don't listen to ComradeLance. If you sway then you sway if you try and stop your self from swaying then you won't enjoy the music and thats what it's all about. Just play the music and enjoy. Very well played
LadyEmilyofEngland 5 years ago
im gonna go practice my violin... im 13 ... i cant play much better! it was really ygood!
FrednFaith 5 years ago
Of course we do, but I try to avoid being mean unlike some people.
ComradeLance 5 years ago
people always have to give their opinion.
jenny49658 5 years ago