Nice visuals on an important subject. The first line and a half of the copy was swallowed, literally, by ambient sound so I wasn't happy about the mix. The reporter sounds more diffident than he needs to-he is the expert, not me the viewer. Words like "the" get pronounced differently before words beginning with vowels than ones beginning with consonants. Nice shooting and editing and good copy writing-work on delivery and you'll be building a bigger package of skills. Good start.
Nice visuals on an important subject. The first line and a half of the copy was swallowed, literally, by ambient sound so I wasn't happy about the mix. The reporter sounds more diffident than he needs to-he is the expert, not me the viewer. Words like "the" get pronounced differently before words beginning with vowels than ones beginning with consonants. Nice shooting and editing and good copy writing-work on delivery and you'll be building a bigger package of skills. Good start.
dweeborama 5 months ago