A Broken Down Bus Chapter 1

Here is the first chapter of A Broken Down Bus. The names used here, will be changed once I get info on my readers to put in the story. Remember, on this video, comment with your name(first name only), age, a vague idea of what you look like, and your favorite brother. Don't be upset if you don't get matched with your fave brother though. Anyway, Chapter 1!!

Sammy's POV (name will change)

Today wasn't a normal day. Sure, I had got up early to take out the trash, had some corn pops for breakfast, and fought with my brother. But, today, I was going to my mom's work. Now, my mom wasn't like a normal mom, who worked at an office, or worked as a teacher. My mom had the most manly job ever... well, what I thought was the most manly job ever. My mom was a mechanic. She fixed cars that broke down on the freeway, and I was never brave enough to go and help her work. What if I saw one of my friends? My brother would go every day, just for something to do during the Summer. Today, i was feeling brave. I was going to go help my mom.

NORMAL POV

Mom: Hunny!! We're going! Come On!
Sammy ran down the stairs, with her ipod and a book.
Mom: Good, you listened to me when i said you didn't have to work. You can read and listen to music. Now come on! We gotta go! John is already in the car!
Sammy followed her mom out to the car where her brother, John was already sitting.
Sammy: move over
John: no, sis, i'm fine here.
Sammy: MOM!!!
Mom: John, move over.
John: ugh...fine.
Sammy got in the car and they all drove out to their mother's work.

By the time they got there, Sammy had already listened to 20 Jonas Brothers songs. They all got out and got to work (not Sammy).
By the end of the day, Sammy's mom had fixed 7 cars, and now they were about to close up for lunch. Suddenly, a woman, a man, and a little boy ran up to them.
Man: Our bus broke down!
Woman: Right there, on the road.
She pointed.
Sammy looked at the bus and gasped. There was a HUGE picture of the Jonas Brothers on the bus, with names drawn all around the picture.
Mom: what is it sammy?
Sammy: You're... you're.. the Jonas Brothers parents aren't you?
Little Boy: And brother!!
Man: yes we are. their all in the bus.
Mom:i'll take a look at it.
Woman: you can come meet them if you want. You too!
She looked at John.
John: i might as well since i'm bored to death here.
She led them over to the bus, while their mother examined the bus with the man.

ok, so it's not that good yet, but the next chapter will have you dieing to read more!

Category:

Music

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• Brothers
• JB
• Jonas
• Love
• OneTrueMedia
• Story

[Smiley10120]

to be honest, i loved it. usually people just run into them or something... but this is a really cool and creative way to meet them =]

[ilynickjonasxoxo]

thanks so much <3

[iluvdogs1212]

tra lalala wait do i need to do this info thing to? or did i already and just forget

[ilynickjonasxoxo]

lol you already did. and check out the videos i mention in chapter 10!! then comment about them in chapter 10 comments.

[ilynickjonasxoxo]

lol maybe i will, but not at the moment. That does sound cool though. haha

[ilynickjonasxoxo]

whats a daughter story? lol

[ilynickjonasxoxo]

ya, it's a jonas brothers love story. Do you like it so far?

[lovly411]

rachelle-15 brown curly hair maybe 5-2 and i love nick!!!

[iluvdogs1212]

okz weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! im very energetic right now ehahaha

[JonasFan95]

AHH!

love it!

marie-16 yrs. (change if needed)

sorta tall with brown (nice) curly hair

joe!