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if anybody has contac with Atillo Massa, have him contact me ASAP. thx
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@jca23 agreed
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@gusthelesswise I disagree with this last statement. Sometimes working in alot of info into a short space of time works well. And in this, I would not consider it alot of info. In a short film there is no time for an 'As the World Turns' buildup to each end every event or unraveling in plot. I think this worked fairly well.
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Unique idea, i enjoyed myself.
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Interesting. The dialouge could be a little wooden at times, but it was really good.
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Loved the detailed Foley effects in this!
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I am a recent grad film student and out of allot of student film I have seen this is in the top ten. Most film students just create something we have already seen before but this was different I give props to to the D.O.P.
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@ledzeppelin64 lol, okay
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@aedryanchklar That was the best gasmask ever, STFU.
Well, the dialogue was good at times, and I liked the comedy with the android. But I think in the writing, too much was being said at once ie. He's a cheater, oh wait he wasn't, we have a son, and a daughter, and I was cheating all along.
That said, the shot's were great and a lot of time obviously went into setting the scene. Favorite shot: 1:25.
I think it's just a case of following the rules of KISS in writing.
gusthelesswise 1 year ago 3
the old guy looks kinda like James Cameron
jca23 1 year ago 2