Melody/Song idea for Chart Jackers

Thank you very much for your comments!

Here is my attempt at putting Melody to lyrics for the Chart Jackers project. I hope you like it! Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. I'm a 20 year old student at exeter, but wish i had done a music course.... also I'm more than happy for any part of it to be used for the project so feel free to pick anything parts out of it you like! I went for this style as i was originally thinking of an 80's A1, 98 degrees type sound, but it came out quite differently lol

Below are the lyrics, not written by me but by Chart jackers/youtube! :

I'm not the best looking, and I'm not the best dressed
Hey, I don't know, I've got nothing
Give me a chance, I'll be better than the rest
Hey girl, listen up cause I've got nothing

Cause you know love ain't forever,
But I've won the greatest prize.
And I feel it's now or never,
When I look into your eyes

I've got nothing, but can't you see me baby?
Look into my eyes and see that I'm crazy?
Nothing, nothing left of me
And the light is going, I can't see,
If you were sunshine I'd bathe in you,
If you were water I'd float on you
If you were fire I'd burn, it's true
There's nothing in my heart but you.

So I cry into my pillow when I wake from a dream
I wake up, and I've got nothing
When I open my eyes, I'm nowhere to be seen
Hey baby, I've got nothing

i need to hear you say my name
just once; this final time
your voice is everything to me
and i want to call you mine

I've got nothing, but can't you see me baby?
Look into my eyes and see that I'm crazy?
Nothing, nothing left of me
And the light is going, I can't see,
If you were sun I'd bathe in you,
If you were sea I'd float on you
If you were fire I'd burn, it's true
There's nothing in my heart but you.

You show me what this crazy world would be
If everything was anything to me
You bring me back when I'm about to fall
You make me feel like I could have it all

But I've got nothing, can't you see me baby?
Look into my eyes and see that I'm crazy?
Nothing, nothing left of me
And the light is going, I can't see,
If you were sun I'd bathe in you,
If you were sea I'd float on you
If you were fire I'd burn, it's true
There's nothing in my heart but you.

Oh there's nothing in my heart
But you

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[zionfarms360]

this is very nice. it's good to hear a nice voice with something well put together (not that the others were bad but this was pleasing to listen to)

[Jimbo459]

Thanks a lot! just wish i could have done it in a big studio and made it sound a lotttt better!

[xxyouroneandonlyxx]

This is so good!

I love it. Favourited it.

please let this win!

[Jimbo459]

Thanks a lot glad you like it :)

[vodapoUK]

yeh. its a bit 'Disneyish'

Lol.. like, how it's slow and calm.

[jamesmanisdabest]

if u live in uk at the moment when xfactor comes around

go for it

[DaliaxM]

I didn't post nothing on this vid. Maybe ive got a hijacker

[partyprash2000]

I LOVE THIS ! A LOT

[princerichard123]

i love this than the one they choice

[bowersbros]

Sorry, mine was a reply to DalixM

[bowersbros]

DId you enter a song?

If not, then why say anything?

If you did, I bet it was worse.

[katybug722]

wow that was soo good. i actully like it better than the real one . you r an amazing singer if u didnt do tht with and editing. you should try to write your own songs because you have amazing talent

[pokeypillow]

Do you write your own music?... you should try if not... Your voice is AMAZING. I'm sure... that you could go far if you tried...

[xLiverpoolMadx]

Very goooooood =]

I like it.

U have got a very nice, pure voice

keep it up m8 :)