last chance a nemi friend/enemy story E.1 S.1

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ok ya wondering what a friend enemy story is? you'll find out.

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i run from trouble. no. im a fighter, despite what you think. but when i want something...i get it,and if i have to go through trouble to get it, then i will. once i get what i want, ill escape the trouble i get myself into. thats what i do. hmm i guess thats labeled under "Criminal". never thought of that.
jade(demi) leaped into the air kicking the cop chasing her, in the face with her heel of her black boot. he collapsed to the floor knocked out and she ran away into the allyway, the darkness over-shadowing her away from the street as she disapeared into a short-cut to her home.
next day.
jade walked into school, looking down at the bracelet on her wrist, her name in little different colored blocks attached to the bracelet. J-A-D-E. she always took it off before getting into trouble,if it fell off then it would be the end and she would be caught for causing all the trouble. as usual the school day went as planned. stupid classes lunce studyhall whatever. at the end of the day while exiting the school,she recieved a text.
text:"theres been a recall of fake diamonds in the east side of town, their really rare types of jewles accidently sent out to jewlry stores all around the state. they are set to arrive at 5 pm today. be at this address to snag them up."
she stared at the address long and hard remembering it. she memorized it then quickly went home to get ready. see, her boss, mr.smith would send her texts or instant messages to tell her about things she would want. i wouldnt call her a criminal though. more just...living. ok yeah a total criminal. but she can do some good. shes not that type of criminal. she can be changed. have a change of heart. rarely. but she can.
at 5 pm she arrived at the building wearing her black baggy tee with zippers on the sleeves to turn it into a tanktop (miley's clothes line) a pair of baggy sleepingbag material white pants, her black leather gloves to protect her hands, with the finger tips cut out of course, and black ankle high flat boots. she looked up at the building. her phone buzzed and she read the txt message.
text:"go in the door and dart down to the basement. sneak down to shipping and snag the package. theres gonna be guards though. be careful."
she did as he told her and she spotted the guards. she listened in on their convo.
"did you hear about that security guy who got kill by that blonde hair women yesterday?" the one guard said. "yea.that was pretty nasty. what do you think she came here for?" the second guard asked. "dont know. dont care. just wanna get paid. thats what i do." the first guard said opening the fan doors pulling out a small black box with the rare diamonds inside. she leaped from the shadows, grabbing the back of the neck on both guards slamming their heads into each other knocking them out. she picked up their gun shooting both of them in the chest. "im not the torture type. ill kill ya while your day dreamin fools." she dropped the gun and snagged the box slipping it under her arm as she exited the building. she could hear the sirens coming already. and that made her run faster. by the time she made it to her usual allyway the cops were on her tail trying to shoot her. jade made her way home.
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i hate this! having to wear this wig every time i have a new assignment. but man do i love the goods. i just have to go to school and keep this under wraps.
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she made her way to a building a few days later, to stop a drug deal from going down since the cops were gonna do nothing to do so. (big story change comin up soon and no its not my opinion its just a storyline) she spotted the two men taking out the money and the "stuff". she was about to jump from the shadows until she spotted another allyway across the street, spying a man inside the alleyway about to jump the exchange and steal the money and turn the drugs into the cops. half bad. half good i guess. she ran as fast as lightning to the man in the alley and tapped his shoulder. he jumped and turned around. "who are you and what do you want?"
"this is my job. either get lost or pay the price." he looked at her cocking his head to the side. "im not gonna let these drugs be on the street. im turning him in...im a cop. and you are?" he stared at her. "lets just say...thats classified info. learn the rules." she glared back at him crossing her arms. "see, im a cop. you dont tell me what your doing here and i can arrest you." "got any I.D?" she whispered. his eyes went wide and he looked at everything but her. "your lying. everone has a tell. i can tell your lying. so since your not a cop. you dont need to know a thing. what you DO need is to leave." he glared at her. "fine." he walked away...
need to see the rest later. yeah its a new story but its a different kind. not really a couple. but not really a fairy tale. its more of both. i got the idea since i was playing mirror's edge. its awesome so like GET IT

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  • What The Fuck Was This

  • oh my god. guys you got me 199 VIEWS IN 3 DAYS!!?? HOLY CRAP!!!! I CANT BELIEVE IT! thank u guys so much!! its amazing!!!!! thanks soooo MUCH!!!

  • It's great

  • yes ! thanks ! ilove your story , keep at it !

  • wow 4 comments already??? i love you guys! before id get 4 comments after its been up for like a week. thanks so much!

  • def its gonna be a long waiat and it will very subtle happen.

  • it's pretty kool, very different!! i liked it!! great writing

  • PLZ make one fall for the other...? or somethin? its really good so far!

  • Awesome (:

  • Love it

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