Hills Like White Elephants by Ernest Hemingway part 1
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U moving the camera as much doesnt help nor does that creppy thing over your right shoulder
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Im sorry, but this reading is pretty awful. I couldn't concentrate on the story because I could only concentrate on how you inflected where you shouldn't, added words that weren't there, spoke too slow through most sentences and closer to the end, you sound like a robot- no emotion.
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As great as it is to find someone who posted a reading of this online, you really need to stop, take breaths.
It's very hard to follow along with because you speak soo slow at times, and soo fast at other times.
Like word vomit.
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you should stop making these videos
byrnestoful 8 months ago 5