JB Love Story:I'll never forget my 1st concert (Intro.)

This is my first story so, it probly won't be very good!! First let me tell you a little bit about the characters. Me as Jocee Jones 17 Brown Hair Brown eyes. 5'5" Tomboyish Paula Jones Brown Hair Hazel eyes. 20 5'7" Tomboyish/Girly My Friend Madison Ness as Nicole Adams 15 Dirty blond Hair Brown eyes 5'4" *We're standing at the McDonalds counter ordering*
Paula: Come on you two, hurry up and order!
Jocee&Nicole: OK!
Nicole: I want a, Ranch BLT and a DR Pepper!!
Jocee:I'll have the same please.
Cashier: Okay, that will be $$.$$. *Takes money from Paula*Thank you!
Paula: No problem. *Takes tray and finds a table* So, what are you going to do for your 16th b-day Nicole?
Nicole: *mouth full of food* I kinda wanted to got to a Jonas Brothers concert, but my parents dont have enough money even for lawn seats.
Paula:What!?
Jocee: *rolls eyes and looks at Paula* Apparently you dont know "Nicole Talk" She said that she wanted to go to a JoBro concert but she dosnt got enough money!
Paula:Oh! Well, why dont you just ahve a sleep over?
Nicole: *Looks at Paula like shes stupid* Slumberparties are for 10 year olds! I'm turning 16, I would like to do something that I will never forget. Like a Jonas Brothers concert.
Paula:What evs! Birthday is a birthday, dont really matter what you do. All it means is that your getting older.
Jocee&Nicole:*look at eachother* Ummmm... yeah... oookkk!
Jocee:Well, I'm done. I'm gunna go wait in the car.
Nicole: Me too.*gets up and follows Jocee*
Paula:*isn't even half done with her food* I'm coming!*cleans up her stuff and follows the girls*
JoceeNicole&Paula:*walking out the resturant*
Paula:*Stops the girls when she sees a flie that says FREE CONCERT TICKETS TO THE JONAS BROTHERS!* Guys, I think Nicole will be able to go to the concert after all!!
Jocee&Nicole:*looks confused*
Jocee:No she won't. Shes broke!
Nicole:*yells at Jocee* HEY!
Jocee:Sorry.But its true*coughs*
Paula:I know but she dosnt have to pay! *pionts to the flier*
Jocee&Nicole:*looks at flier*
Nicole:OH SWEET!!! Look it even gives us 3 tickets! We can all go and Paula can drive us.*looks pleadingly at Paula*
Paula: *sigh* Yeah, why not.
Jocee&Nicole:*jumps up and screams!*YEEEEEEEAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Paula:*fills out the form untill she gets to the bottom* UhOh!
Jocee&Nicole:*stop jumping and go over to her.Look at the bottom of the paper.*
Nicole:It says that we get ONE backstage pass. Well, thats not an uhoh, its easy....I get it!
Jocee:WHAT!? How is that fair!?
Nicole: DUUUUUHHHHH!!!Its my birthday, I should get the pass!
Jocee:Well it may be your birthday, but you owe me cuz you didnt do anything for me on my 16th b-day! I should get it!
Jocee&Nicole:*start srguing worse and yelling about who should get the pass*
Paula:*stops them* BREAK IT UP!!!! Nicole will get it.....
Jocee:What!?
Paula:*ignores her* ..beacause it IS her birthday, BUT, she will go back and ask if she can bring her friends back. Ofcousre the boys will say yes! So then we will all get to go back!
Jocee&Nicole:*shrug shoulders and nod heads*
Jocee:That works for me on one condition. If the boys say no, Nicole has to come back out!
Nicole: Thats not...
Paula:*cutting Nicole off* Fair enough.
Nicole:*sighs* Fine.
JoceeNicole&Paula:*finish filling out the application and go back to Paula and Jocee's house*
Paula:Since the results come back tomorrow, lets go back and see if see if we won okay?
Jocee&Nicole:Cool Okay,I know it was short and boring, but it was the intro and my first story so please comment and rate!! Chapter will be up tomorrow probly!

Category:

Comedy

Tags:

• JBlovestory
• Jocee
• Myfirstconcert
• Nicole
• OneTrueMedia
• Paula

[Jobrosarehott21]

Ooh. This is good. I like how it's different than everyone elses. :]

[JoBrosRule93]

omg omg omg! thank yoiu so much fro reading my story! I practically worship your writing 'cuz it's so good!!

[NicoleandLeannashow]

love it next one soon

[JoBrosRule93]

Thanks, I really am going to enjoy typing them!

[XoJbLoveoX]

loved it. =]

[xoBxJoBroLovrxo]

haha nice 1 jess! btw JoBrosRule93, great stroyyy loveee it!!! =)

[DJDangersJessiJane]

I would so steal that flier!!! I be like MWUAHAHAHA I will meet the Jonas Brothers, even if i have to kill someone!! *Laughs menacingly* no not really! lol