Superman Serial #1 The Beginning
Uploader Comments (richracer)
All Comments (15)
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Completely awful
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wow ii just put in the 1st comment in over a year :O
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Okay, I can tell where you did most of this, but where the heck did you do that "Superman atop the planet Earth" bit from Metropolis Destroyed? (Good use of Faultline, by the way!!)
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Looks pretty good! I just subscribed, and I'll check out your other films later, probably this weekend! :)
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Which site do you do this? That is so cool!
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K ill see ur other videos im sure they will be better
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I know I know , this was the first one I made, the new ones will be better I just need to get the character into better zones... I am putting a halloween one together so please check back, it will be all fighting!!!
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The speech bubbles were hardly readable. But I must say that that was one of the best Superman outfits I have seen in such movies. And the Clark Kent too. So improve on the story telling aspect of the videos(remember the rule: Show, not tell) and you'll be alright :)
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This videoclip has his moments, I like the whirlwind move to change costumes(which is also used in the tv series actually) I assume you were trying to tell a story and that story probably was in your mind but atlas(Ehm, I mean alas) it didn't show.
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I am sorry you didn't like this one. Try another clip or please, suggest what you would like to see. The constructive critisism always helps me to make better movies. This was the first one I tried to see if it would even work. They should get better as I get the character into more zones that offer more things to fight and do!!!
The spin is Wonder Woman's
melekashiro 5 years ago
Not entirely, In the first movie he spins into the sidewalk, so he could theoretically do it, thanks for the comment though. Working on some different costume changes, my favorite is the one when he is running behind the fence in Superman 2. Yeah I agree, the way he had the yellow sweater tied around his neck was kinda gay.
richracer 5 years ago