IELTS Argument essay cleanup (1 of 6)

Short video series where we cleanup a student's essay and analyze a difficult IELTS essay question.

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[alainsoul]

I have purchased online course last week !!!

But No body email me and u didn't reply my email !!!!!

[EnglishRyan]

Hi alainsoul,

Yes, I did. You applied from Japan, correct? I sent an email with all course instructions to your email address but did not receive any reply from you. Please send a private message to me with an alternative personal email address (and a copy of the email address you used to pay my PayPal account so that I can verify this is indeed the correct person) and I will get you all set up.

Thanks,

Ryan

[aziznurani]

hello this video is very use full but as you said will have space before the paragraph but in ielts it is not allowed to have so how we going to loose over marks?

[alainsoul]

Hi Ryan

First of all i would like to thank you for the online correction for IELTS. I have sent the email for HOTMAIL account, then i try to gmail it is working :)

I m from United Arab Emirates, i was in a hurry to see your corrections and comments for the Essays cos my exam is nest week.

sweet regards from Dubai

Miss AlAin Soul

[chongsp1977]

very clear explanation, thanks!