I'm so sorry, but I'm sorta gonna agree with camo4x4s. I'm sorry....But THERE WAS ONE OR TWO GOOD PARTS IN IT! where the monster was talking and where that kid walked in the bathroom. 3 stars...I'm sorry but I gotta be honest.I'll give you 5 stars cause you tried.
yeah, we were trying to make it so that you never do quite figure out what exactly was going on. we wanted to have it so that the first half was simply building up to the second half, because as you probably noticed, EVERYTHING happens in this segment. only the ending could not deliver . i will probably shoot a few more scenes to add more character development so that people will actually care about ryan & luke. once we have done some polishing to the final cut, we wil post the whole thing.
I'm so sorry, but I'm sorta gonna agree with camo4x4s. I'm sorry....But THERE WAS ONE OR TWO GOOD PARTS IN IT! where the monster was talking and where that kid walked in the bathroom. 3 stars...I'm sorry but I gotta be honest.I'll give you 5 stars cause you tried.
Jeffluvs80s 3 years ago
thank you, I will remember that for future reference.
I love constructive criticism because it helps me filter outwhat techniques to use and not to use for future projects. thank you.
sampsan1 3 years ago
lol.
coolcatz699 3 years ago
lol um, thank you but it isn't supposed to be funny.
sampsan1 3 years ago
Can't understand what the monster is saying and same comments as the 1st one I left on the other one.
I was not scared... I can tell you have a passion for video. I undersand that feeling.
I don't understand anything about the script or the concept of surpintine from these two clips.
I hope this helps... sorry if it is not what you wanted to hear.
Camo4x4s 3 years ago
yeah, we were trying to make it so that you never do quite figure out what exactly was going on. we wanted to have it so that the first half was simply building up to the second half, because as you probably noticed, EVERYTHING happens in this segment. only the ending could not deliver . i will probably shoot a few more scenes to add more character development so that people will actually care about ryan & luke. once we have done some polishing to the final cut, we wil post the whole thing.
sampsan1 3 years ago