Killing Lucky Charms
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I like turtles
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pretty good, but I think the ending where the guy is dissapointed and looking up is too long.
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first!
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@09ine oh my mistake, yeah i didnt notice the recoil before. Maybe because in the close shot of lerechaun man in the woods he sorta recoils directly up, not backwards the way the gun should make it go. And also in the scene from the stables at the end, where the ak47 seems to have very little recoil. But theyre just simple acting mistakes and could be fixed easily so yeah haha
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sweet video
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@Kazmo93 there was recoil in every shot? what are you referring to?
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Pretty good job, I liked the sound and video editing. Just a couple of things that i observed:
a) Be careful of the lighting, some of the indoor shots with sunlight through the window completely washed out the actor in the foreground.
2) I think some colour grading would have really brought it together nicely and given it a more professional touch. Colour grading is something I am still trying to understand fully
d) Lucky should have ironed his shirt :)
Keep it up. Look forward to seeing more
iicaptain123 7 months ago
@iicaptain123 Thanks, it's great to read comments like this. We're going to work on controlling the exposure in the future to avoid a). I tried not to grade subtlety (first two characters warmer, other guy colder) but I don't think it came across strong enough. Also my monitor may not be calibrated correctly. We got the shirt from a thrift store for $4, wrinkles was the least of our concerns with that thing haha.
NElangbam 7 months ago
Amazing filming! i saw this on the airsoft facebook page im subbng :)
FireSquadAirsoft 7 months ago
@FireSquadAirsoft thanks alot, facebook is having trouble showing my posts with the link, so if it looks like I'm spamming I'm not trying to. Glad you liked it.
NElangbam 7 months ago
Ohhhhh i get it! He was a leprechaun hahaha. Nice ending. The acting could be improved though. Jerk your arm after each shot to show recoil so its more realistic. Also, the dude with the marshmallow treats in his eyes blinked... Dead people dont blink lol, make sure you watch out for stuff ups like that. Also, might be harsh lol but none of the actors looked like they were really cut out for the whole running scene, no offence lol. But overall, nice job :)
Kazmo93 7 months ago
@Kazmo93 thanks for the advice, funny you should say that b/c the guy in the white shirt is in the Marines and I'm sure he'll get a kick from reading your comment haha
NElangbam 7 months ago