I think there is some great material here, including writing. The sequence "You let me have sex with him after you had sex with him without a condom?" followed by "But I took a shower" is great stuff. Kudos!
If this is supposed to come off as a soap opera, maybe you should be talking into the camera, it just makes it seem all the more fake. Otherwise it gives off a slight vibe of cheesiness, but so would anything else that was filmed at home. Your acting skills aren't bad by they're nothing special either.
We can have 8 baby's
Mohamedaliba 4 months ago
@puetohoi hahaha
breadbaker226 1 year ago
Lol
slayor27 1 year ago
I'll get all three of them pregnant.
puetohoi 2 years ago
total trash
lovedog49507 3 years ago
second taht notion. very much second that notion
12valvepower 3 years ago
dirty vagina. lol
learnermind 4 years ago
Brady, Can i put a bun in your oven ???
deanjfk 4 years ago
I think there is some great material here, including writing. The sequence "You let me have sex with him after you had sex with him without a condom?" followed by "But I took a shower" is great stuff. Kudos!
Rescue162 4 years ago
If this is supposed to come off as a soap opera, maybe you should be talking into the camera, it just makes it seem all the more fake. Otherwise it gives off a slight vibe of cheesiness, but so would anything else that was filmed at home. Your acting skills aren't bad by they're nothing special either.
OaTmEaLfAiRy 4 years ago