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Holdin' On: A Nick Jonas Story Chapter 2

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Okee. Chapter 2. Thanks for the comments so far. BTW. They ARE famous in the story. just saying... :D
Do you want me to do anything withthese? Like, questions or favorite comment or something like that?
Next chapter later... WOHO! :D:D
Again..random vid. ha
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I pulled into a spot next to the gas pump and parked my car. I turned off the engine and slipped off my sun glasses. After tossing them onto the dash, I hopped out of my car. As I opened the gas tank, I looked around the gas station. There wasn't very many people there. Only a few cars, maybe about 5. One of them caught my eye, well, not one of the cars. A girl. She was also getting gas, at the pump across from mine. She was concentrating on pumping the gas into her (nice) car just right. It was really cute the way she was crinkling her nose and the way ... what am I thinking? I shook my head. I don't even know her. I turned away from the brown haired beauty and started to fill up my 'stang's gas tank. I couldn't help it, I looked back at the girl. She was looking at me with wide eyes. I sighed but smiled at her. Her lips lifted up into a slight smile and she blushed. Man, she is cute. The thunk of the pump as it finished filling up the tank brought me back to reality. I reluctantly looked away from the girl and back to the gas pump. I closed up my gas tank and hit a few of the buttons on the screen. I saw the girl walking into the convenient store. The machine beeped and I turned my attention to it completely. I hit a few more buttons then reached in my car and grabbed my Ray Bands. I slipped them on then locked my car. Stuffing my hands into my pockets, I walked into the store. The little bell chimed as I walked through. I looked around for a second then headed over to where the soda was. I think I'll buy myself a Diet Coke ... the girl just happened to be looking at the sodas over there. She had straight, brown hair that went a little past her shoulders. She had on a pair of (short) shorts and a couple tanks. You know, I never really got why girls layer them. Hm ... whatever. I walked up next to her but didn't exactly look at her. I was looking for Coke, remember? I could see in the reflection in the door that the girl had lifted up her Aviators and was peering at me with wide eyes. I turned and smiled at her.

"Hey."

She smiled back nervously. "H-hey." The girl stuttered, turning a deep red.

I chuckled under my breath and offered my hand. "I'm Nick."

She glanced at my hand and nervously shook it. "Ellie."

I smiled, "that's a pretty name."

"Thank you." Ellie blushed a deeper shade of red and released my hand.

"No problem," I said then turned back to the drink selection. "So, any idea what you want to get?"

"I was contemplating between a Coke or Dr. Pepper." She also turned back to looking at all the sodas. "But, I just can't seem to decide."

"Hm," I scratched my chin a little. "Well, you could always just buy them both."

"I could," she turned to me, "but which would I drink first?"

I turned toward her, too, and grinned. "You could mix them. Or, you could let me buy them and drink one while I drink the other ... together, like ... yeah."

She smiled widely, "sure. That sounds like a good plan." She sure had a pretty smile ...

"Awesome." I opened the door to the refrigerator. The cold air swirled around us as I grabbed a Diet Coke and a Dr. Pepper. I let the door slam close as I turned back to Ellie. I smiled and led her to the front of the store silently. As I put the soda's on the counter, I couldn't help but notice the two men who walked in. They didn't look very ... friendly. Ellie stepped closer to me, subconsciously. I brushed it off and turned my attention to buying the drinks. The teen behind the counter was too busy looking at a magazine and texting to notice us.

I cleared my throat. Nothing. I did it again, "excuse me?"

"Wha?" She looked up and her mouth dropped. "Oh, my GOD. You're Nick Jonas!"

I smiled, "yup."

"Can I have an autograph?! Please?" She begged.

"Um, sure." I glanced up at the clock that was up on the wall and suppressed a sigh.
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Okay. When my friend read this, this is what she said. I think it's hilarious, so I'm sharring :)
Haha, Chynnah, you write the best feedback EVER. omg.
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HA! The chick behind the counter not doing her JOB.
Pft, that's terrible.
Love it :)
Yo, this is a cool story :)
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HA! I just love it.... Beat that one, Chii! Yeah.. that's right. Beat your own comment! WOHO!

I.. had redbull a few minutes ago. I'm terribly sorry. HAHAHA :D

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  • wooohooo it was great

    post soon

    wow creepy stalker fans always asking for autographs

    i like to ramble its fun

    I LOVE YOU ....B-A-R-N-E-Y

  • .... barney?

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  • love this story

    your an amazing writer!

    i know im reading it about a year too late but oh well!!! :]

  • ????

  • hehe, yeppers

  • hahaha true true lol

  • hehe actually it should be " Rice moves Nick" lollzz me and my friends say that

  • These are the shizz!!

  • nice moves nick...LMAO hahah u n red bull..lol..i know how it feels ive seen my best frind after she has drank one..lol...but amazing :)

  • Nick - so smooth! :D:D

  • DUDE!!! HAHA! You used my comment! ILOVEIT!

    Haha.

    Dude. Idthink I can beat that, haha.

    It's cool though, I can try again, ha.

  • ooooh me likey :D yesh yesh. I would have picked Dr. Pepper tho.. I LOVE Dr. Pepper. or maybe Vanilla Coke. Do you like Vanilla Coke? I think it's awesome haha and i love the instant crush Nick's got on Ellie haha he tries to hide it... kinda... not really... haha :D LOVE IT darlinggg!!

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