Overall, this is a great peice of work and I hope you do develop this further (once post traumatic stress has worn off. :P) because the idea is creative, fun, unique and clever. I can actually see this being a game played an varying consols and witha team, you can easliy improve or expand what you would fins hard to do on your own. The music was also great, I do love it. :)
It's areal shame you also didn't have the indoor scene, but I do recommend that ina few moths you try and add it, just because it breaks up the overall trailer. It's all outside, so it seems liniar. But the animations are entertaining, clear and the background is nice enough to keep it going. :) My only otehr critique is that when Jake puts his bag down before he draws 'hood', he seems a bit stiff. Other than those 3 things, this is a stunning peice of work.
This is absolutely stunning love. Mind if I share this on facebook? I think the guys would love to see your work.
You've done a top notch job here, the animations are fanatstic (that opening scene blew my mind awya as to how good it was), unique and creative and I love how it all came out. I see what you mean now that the 2D characters aren't too clear on the walls, but that is a technical thing, and it you lightened to scene, you may have ruined the mood.
This is fantastic work, I love the concept and atmosphere for the setup. The main character is quirky and endearing in an urban sense.
- Gemma
DreamlandMessenger 2 years ago
Overall, this is a great peice of work and I hope you do develop this further (once post traumatic stress has worn off. :P) because the idea is creative, fun, unique and clever. I can actually see this being a game played an varying consols and witha team, you can easliy improve or expand what you would fins hard to do on your own. The music was also great, I do love it. :)
ShadowWorm 2 years ago
It's areal shame you also didn't have the indoor scene, but I do recommend that ina few moths you try and add it, just because it breaks up the overall trailer. It's all outside, so it seems liniar. But the animations are entertaining, clear and the background is nice enough to keep it going. :) My only otehr critique is that when Jake puts his bag down before he draws 'hood', he seems a bit stiff. Other than those 3 things, this is a stunning peice of work.
ShadowWorm 2 years ago
This is absolutely stunning love. Mind if I share this on facebook? I think the guys would love to see your work.
You've done a top notch job here, the animations are fanatstic (that opening scene blew my mind awya as to how good it was), unique and creative and I love how it all came out. I see what you mean now that the 2D characters aren't too clear on the walls, but that is a technical thing, and it you lightened to scene, you may have ruined the mood.
ShadowWorm 2 years ago