once burnt, twice shy ( an original )

Few days ago, I dreamt of two naked bodies floating up from a car window. It was so bizzare I wrote a song!

I thought twice about posting this cz I've used possibly all the wrong chords AND my voice is really bad in it. But its no vid transfer/technical glitch..thats just my voice!:( wish i had a decent singing voice...
Anyway, lyrics :p

Bodies floated up, from car windows
Skyward like helium balloons,
Locked in embrace they headed for the sun,
only to be burnt to dust
And as they fell fast, and hit the ground below
they hid behind a misty veil

ch#1 But a veil of cigarette smoke can't hide your crying eyes
And the smile across your face
can't hide the hurt inside
You can try and salvage all the pieces of your broken heart
You can try and live again
You can try and love again

Now that you have been, so hurt and burnt
You can hold new hands and let them go
Coz you'd have to be a fool, a fool who walks alone
And head back up and stare into that sun

Ch#2 No rain upon your skin can wash the tears away
That whiskey in your glass,
can't drown your fears away
You can try and slavage all the pieces of your old, cold heart
you can try and live again
you can try and love again

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Category:

Music

Tags:

• dream
• meaning
• heartbreak
• songwriting
• amateur

[Atemishotgirl12]

Your really good!

[m3sdup]

:) thanks

[ZhouThien]

nice to hear u wrote such a song. really neat ^^ your voice is pretty decent, not bad ^^

props to your song ^^

[pwyncessangie1]

good=]