An overall good visual telling of this popular story. The shooting was pretty good (especially the last shot) as well as the editing (especially the last little bit).
However, the acting was a little weak, and I think it would have been better without the VO. Show, don't tell.
With a little more technical finesse this would have been a great modern film parable. It really helps to start with a strong story. Good job. -Luke
An overall good visual telling of this popular story. The shooting was pretty good (especially the last shot) as well as the editing (especially the last little bit).
However, the acting was a little weak, and I think it would have been better without the VO. Show, don't tell.
With a little more technical finesse this would have been a great modern film parable. It really helps to start with a strong story. Good job. -Luke
TomySky 3 years ago
Enjoyed it, thanks!
PixelPablo 3 years ago
Great message!
fam3c 3 years ago