Video 4 ( Unborn. My deepest poem)

This short poem reflects what I am all about.
Life itself is a massive subject but after a lifetime of thinking about it all, i buttened it all up in three lines.
" Unborn" explains.
All the very best,
Barry.

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[Barrybwm]

Thanks again Vince

"Preciated".

My take on life won't catch on.

Maybe i'm too deep and my "bottom line"

theory needs dressing up to make it acceptable?

Ultimately, I am of the opinion that all of life must be personal to the person in question, whoever he / she is and whatever they think at any time in infinity.

That loads total responsibility onto that person but only for themselves and their thoughts and actions throughout life.

It will never catch on.

It's right though.

Barry.

[coreycantskate]

first and foremost i love your thoughts, its hard to even find real poetic thoughts on youtube, but im not a big fan of the poem. In no way am i trying to disrespect you, because i do lovew your thoughts and your concept alot.

i will post some poems if i can soon so i can be judged as well, because i dont want to be looked at as someone who talks a big game and cant back it up

[Barrybwm]

Hi "coreycantskate "!

Thanks a lot for your positive response.

Appreciated.

Barry.

[CarolynViolin]

Barry, This poem is lovely! You write beautifully and with great sensitivity, and you have captured the essence of what life is all about. We are like visitors here on earth. Sadly, nothing is forever. We all have a purpose. Each of us is given certain abilities and talents and it is up to each of us to make the most of what we have. And then after we have passed on, if we have done great things, our legacy can continue to live on. Again, it's a great poem, Barry! Carolyn

[Barrybwm]

Hi Carolyn Thanks a lot for your lovely comments. An individual can do whatever they like in life. However, whatever they say and do has an affect. So...if you want something in this life, you must create it yourself. How? By what you say and how you say it. What you do and how you do it. It's all personal. End of story. Barry. xxx

[Barrybwm]

Hi Sharon.

Talking about life itself BEING yourself...

It still isa tough concept to handle, but if it's the truth and reality what's the point in denying it?

I have to say i'm not happy with people against people constantly.

Nobody wins in the end so how stupid is that?

If we don't, somehow? get together as a group of vunerable people in the world and sort it all out, what will happen eventually?

Death for us all.

Selfish people do create that and it is a selfish world.

Barry.

xxx

[mgproductions2007]

I wrote a book too... of 42 poems.. you should check it out!

[vinceman]

oops! that's GOOD HEART! .

[vinceman]

classic Barry. Simple yet deep.

If you haven't got his book , definitely buy a copy! Its cheap at half the price and filled with ruminating thoughts like this one. Barry has a way of leaving you with a resonating thought that you remember at odd times of the day. He celebrates life as only a true poet and someone with a good hear can.

He is a poet for the ages. I'll be reading Barry's words when they cart me away..