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Uploaded by on Aug 8, 2010

Whoa, it feels like I was here just a couple weeks ago saying goodbye to "Luckier." I'm so sad, yo... :'(

Thank you all for letting me share this wonderful story of my boyfriend and I. We make half a year on the 12th! I'm so excited! I'm glad you all enjoyed our story :)

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The calm brightness of the sun peeked through the blinds of the bedroom, causing me to awake from my slumber on that Sunday morning. I inhaled blissfully, hoping for the cool scent that generally emitted from Nick's body in the morning, but I felt nothing of his presence.

I quickly sat up, looking around the room in bewilderment. Where is he? Has he left me? Then I was suddenly reminded...

I'm getting married today.

An excited, yet slightly smug smile replaced my anxiety, and I slowly sunk back into bed, taking in the moment. It was then that I noticed what was next to me.

On Nick's empty pillow laid a single, red rose and a note card reading, "To my one and only, I can't wait to marry you today!"

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I stood anxiously behind the thick, wooden doors of the chapel, tightly gripping onto my bouquet of lilies. I was minutes away from being in the presence of my fiancé. However, behind all my composure, I was a self-conscious wreck, so I sought refuge in my Maid of Honor.

"Do I look okay? Does the gown look alright?" I asked quickly, once again running my eyes up and down the dress attached to my body.
"Calm down!" Courtney laughed lightly. "Sis, you look beautiful."
"Thank you." I mouthed, holding her hand.
She smiled joyfully then took her place in front of me. "It's time!" she whispered excitedly.
I stepped off to the side, out of sight, breathing deeply. "He's waiting for you." I said to myself.

Courtney had reached the front of the chapel, and now it was time for my grand entrance. I heard the shuffling of feet as the audience stood upright, and the organ player transitioned his piece into a sweet-sounding melody.

I appeared before the crowd, all eyes on me, but I could only see one person. The only one that mattered.

Nick.

His eyes were locked with mine, so deeply enchanted with each other. I could see his breathing become deeper and more obvious. I imagined him thinking, "Breathe, Nick. Don't pass out."

As soon I was within his reach, he took my hands and mouthed gently, "I love you." And so the ceremony begins...

After the pastor spoke his final words, we shared a kiss so passionate and tender, so personal that the crowd was left in a breathless awe.

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We exited the chapel, hand-in-hand, leaving the behind the ecstatic, cheerful crowd. Sliding into the sleek, black limo, we finally had the moment to ourselves.

"Mrs. Jonas." he whispered to himself, running his fingertips along my cheeks. "I can't believe we made it here. Together."
"You and me." I said, spreading my glowing smile.

This complete mood of serenity filled our close bodies, allowing it to be one of the most romantic moments we've experienced. It was a great way to start the new life we were about to share together.

After many minutes passed, Nick sat up and looked at me seriously. "Did you feel that? We just parked."
"Mhm." I nodded, hiding a smile.
He raised his eyebrow and eyed me suspiciously. "We can't be there already. Where are we?"
"You'll see." I smiled, taking my hand in his and leading him out of the limo.

The fresh air greeted us immediately as we stepped onto the curb of a familiar New York street. I was hoping he'd notice surroundings, but instead he kept his eyes on me.

"Look in front of you!" I giggled happily.
He chuckled then stopped in mid-breath. "It's our coffee shop!" he said, his attention now perked up. "Why are we here?"

Before I could answer, I led him into the shop, still in our wedding attire, and stopped right where we had stood a few years ago as unknown strangers.

"This very spot," I began, "is where we first met. Where I proposed." I laughed to myself. "Unfortunately we couldn't get married here, but I have something that can make up for that."

Nick's eyes were now filled with excitement. His lips parted as he waited for me to continue speaking.

"So today, this is where I announce that... you're gonna be a daddy." I grinned, unable to contain my thrill.
He stood there, mimicking my actions as tears of joy filled up the rims of his eyes. "We're having a baby!" he suddenly exclaimed to all that were in the coffee shop. "I can't believe this!" he shook his head. Then he looked at me with soft, loving eyes. "And I can't believe you're mine forever."
"Forever." I repeated, closing the gap between us with a fervent kiss.


THE END! Wah :'(
Tell me what you LOVED about "The Coffee Shop!"

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  • Ohmigawd! That was one of THE best stories ever!

    I want a Sequel!!!! Lol.(:

    Nelena's have a baby! HELL YEAH!

    I Loved It So Damn Much!!

  • @NelenaStories96 Oops! I meant to press the thumbs up, but I accidentally pressed the thumbs down! x( But thank you so much! That means a lot to me! :DDD

  • Ohmigodd!

    This story is just so sweet.

    I cried!

    I loved EVERYTHING about "The Coffee Shop"!

    But mostly, I loved the intense, sweetness and all the romance in this story and also the fact that it was almost true(:

    Happy advance half-a-year anniversary to you and your boyfriend.

    I personally think you both deserve eachother.

    Okay, before I get OVER melodramatic,

    I just wanna wish you and your boyfriend the best and hopefully both of you will last long!~

  • @NoorHilwaniie94 Thank you SO much! I just hope that I can write a story that is just as great as this one :) I wanna thank you for being so thoughtful and wishing us the best <3

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  • OMG! OMG! OMG!!! They're going to have a baby!!! You need to make a sequel!!! PLEASEEEEE!!! =) Anywyas I loved how this story ended but I didn't like the fact that Nina was a bitch to Selena... I also loved the way some parts of the story were related to your life, that's awesome, plus that's particially what writing is about. It's about sharin your experiences & opinions... Just simply loved it!!

  • That was adorablee!.. Seriously the sweetest story ever!.. Your amazing. Epp. I l<3ved it. A sequel, com'on!.. Please :P ..

  • That was adorablee!.. Seriously the sweetest story ever!.. Your amazing. Epp. I l<3ved it. A sequel, com'on!.. Please :P .. ഇ

  • HOLY POOO.

    I read your stories 24/7 (no creeeper.) ahha, this was AMAZING.

    && the finale, is adorablee. with the coffee shop, and when she announced she's preg, my jaw LEGIT dropped. Ahha (: inbox me, i would love to do a collab with you sometimee. (:

  • AMAZING!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!

  • Awww I loved the ending u are an aammmmaaaazzzinggg writer :)

  • This ending was simply amazing. :D :D :D

    What i liked about the Coffee Shop? EVERYTHING!

  • @jen7n10 No problem! I know you can write a story as awesome as this one! :D

  • I LOVE evrything epecially the relationship. LOVE IT =D

  • I LOVED everything about this story! The fact that it was somewhat based on real life, the romance and just because it was nelena :)

    I'm really gonna miss this story :'(

    But the ending couldn't have been cuter(^.^)

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