this is a song i wrote, i thought it was fairly awesome so once again i recorded hoping for an opinion from the public, so go nuts, possitive or negative (profanity excluded), just please comment, will be really apriciated.... btw i cant spell
lyrics
i watched the sun rise today
i had this feeling tht i had to run away
run to you
i'm mourning over yesterday
it always go to fast it never seems to stay
just like you
we're so caught up in our regret
so we sleep for ever and start to forget
what is true
so here i am going cold
little did i know my life wwas being sold
just like you
just like you
i wanna see the sky
and never wonder why its raining
on me
i wanna see the stars
forget about old scars tht plauge me
what i need is somebody
just like you
this fears a drug i cant escape
going round in circules no one can relate
to this tune
walking in shadows till we meet
waiting for 2 hearts to combine in beat
waiting for you
im waititing for you
cause just like you
just like you
i wanna see the sky
and never wonder why its raining
on me
i wanna see the stars
forget about old scars tht plauge me
what i need is somebody
who will lift me up when im down
tell me her love without a sond
and stear me from greed
so ill sit and ill wait for her to come,
and ill watch people go by one by one
cause i need sombody
just like you
i need you
i watched the sun rise today
i had this feeling tht i had to run away
run to you
Have you re-recorded this? xx
987Fuckface 1 year ago
@987Fuckface yeah man, i apologise for the crap quality
02lthomam 1 year ago
Try not to sing through your nose....and don't hold back a sustain any note. Just let it go. Other than tha, it was good. I have been tryingto write a song lately. Nice story behind the song too! :)
Corsonfamily 2 years ago 6
thanks, i dont normaly sound like, its just at the moment im im singing in too a webcam.... so i have to sing quietly, also in this song i kinda had a cold, you can hear it, but yeah.... i really appreciate the feed back, drop in around september time when i will have it properly recorded,
once again
thank
02lthomam 2 years ago