FALLEN (another original)

READ LYRICS HERE....Yet another original I can not seem to get a recording that I feel content with. Alas, back to the start and begin where I begun. I give to you my first take of my newest original song, Fallen. (please do try to ignore my ridiculous faces and rolling eyes. can't you just taste the frustration?) Fallen (©2008)

Thats alright, we ain't got to talk about it
what you'd say, I've heard before
sometimes we get tired from the inside out
sometimes our legs can't hold us up (chorus)
we all fall, we all fall, we all fall down sometimes 2x

Awake at night, my thoughts get the best of me
well if that ain't right, I've got something wrong
its ok that I am feeling this way today cause
god knows my mind just won't shut up

ungraceful steps, choices and the chances we take
still, I'm impressed I think I felt my whole heart break
but lets move on, lets go on, lets get us to a better place,
lets move on, lets get on we both know we all fall down
(chorus)
(first verse)
(chorus)

thanks for listening. please rate, comment, and of course subscribe (if you like) ~ love and respect~ 5$

Category:

Music

Tags:

• alternative
• folk
• acoustic
• FiveDollarGuitar
• guitar
• original
• fallen
• girl
• song

[KrisShred]

You have a beautiful voice, and I like the way you play your guitar.

[FiveDollarGuitar]

thank you thank you for listening, commenting, and subbing!

[robby63]

My advice, $5, is to always record your songs in 1 take. I believe that the magic is in the initial recording,and that's never more evident than it is right here. So what if you don't like your facial gestures, your superb alto voice is what gets and retains my attention. You also tap into what we all feel in this song, so it is more than relatable. Added to my faves and 5 stars from me! Robby;)

[FiveDollarGuitar]

thank you so so much!! i like that you like my songs! happy to have you listening!

[akaCoachIsHere]

zeroing-in on the folks - lovelorn and loves lost - that's what's special here. dirzliebe says what i now KNOW too - friend.

[Dirzuliebe]

 ever ... when i listen to this .... i get the idea ... you could be a good friend in this world ... and i am shure you are for many .....

[itchytoke]

5 stars

[BasilWahn]

wonderful original, I really enjoyed listening, 5*

[toostonedtocare]

well round at tomboysongs' place.. she played me this song.. so I checked out the original... wow! Brilliant eh? ;-)

[natneedsfriends]

very emotional song,you sing from ur heart like me,thats the best kind of songs to hear!beautiful!!!!!!

[sevenender]

this is special and wonderfull:)

greets

ender

[reliablebow]

love the line..."God knows my mind won't shut up."...Great song

[TheNebakanezer]

This is a great song! 5 stars.

[Cliffbrock]

You sure write,sang and play from your heart ! Well done ! 5 stars --:)Rod