"Whiny Breakup Song" An Original Song

Another song from my NaNoWriMo novel. It's my longest song to date. As per usual, not the best take in the world, but I have schoolwork to do and a novel to write.

Lyrics:
I was the one in scouting
So you better believe
If anyone deserves brownie points
From this breakup, it's me
I put up with all your crap
And I think you will agree
That you deserve nothing
For your brutal honesty

You're a jerk, and I'm glad you're gone
And this is not a whiny breakup song
You left me, so now we're done
And I must say that I'm much better off
Without you

I am the one who sat there
While you said that we were through
And I am sure that what you said
Was the honest truth
You wanted to date other girls
So you gave me the boot
So forgive me if I don't sit
Here crying over you

You're a jerk, and I'm glad you're gone
And this is not a whiny breakup song
You left me, so now we're done
And I must say that I'm much better off
Without you

You walked away from the best thing
That you could ever get
And I'm not the one who
Will end up with regrets
I'm only sorry for the fact
That we ever met
I'll give back everything you bought
And then we will be set

You're a jerk, and I'm glad you're gone
And this is not a whiny breakup song
You left me, so now we're done
And I must say that I'm much better off
Without you

I guess I'll forgive you
But that doesn't mean we're cool
You've got a lot of 'splainin' to do
About why you're such a tool

You're a jerk, and I'm glad you're gone
And this is not a whiny breakup song
You left me, so now we're done
And I must say that I'm much better off
Without you

You're a jerk, and I'm glad you're gone
And this is not a whiny breakup song
You left me, so now we're done
And I must say that I'm much better off
Without you

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Whiny
• Breakup
• Song
• Tally
• Deushane
• Live2TiVo
• NaNoWriMo
• Ukulele

[RussiaSaturn]

I like the chord progression of the chorus. Man, ukuleles just always sound great, don't they? Now I'd like to get one.

[live2tivo]

Thank you so much. Ukes really are fantastic. I got the one in this video on Amazon for about $25...best impulse buy I've ever made.

[aenaithia]

I can't listen to your stuff anymore! I listen once and it gets stuck in my head for the next two days! D:

[live2tivo]

It happens. Hehe. How goes your novel?

[ahnkochee]

Tally you are SO entertaining, thnk you. 5 stars

[live2tivo]

Aww. Thank you so much! I'm glad someone is amused by me!

[hibiscused]

Unique voice, delightful video...really nice.

[mariakosta5605]

lol

[BorisVanMeurs]

This is better than my liver

[lifeinmyhead]

amazing with a side of awesomeness! lol good song, thumb uped and Favorited =)... oh and subed =P

[Ghostnightshadows]

You are still amusing. Now I'm curious as to what your nano novel neo type thing is about. You always say that so fast I don't understand what it means.... But I'm interested. Just curious, why are there so many haulted parts? Are you just checking for the lyrics or next chords?

[bobolob]

Oh man, I wish I had found you sooner!

[snazz1993]

Entertaining stuff. You've got a great voice.