The second in the series tells the tale of how everything got going in the first place. This was created the next year for the Alts Fest and was created in one day with editing the next.
This is an interesting idea. It has a sort of Monty Pythonish feel to it. My first suggestion would be to speed things up. Faster cuts and more of them, maybe more motion with the camera. Also I'd suggest delivering your lines faster (which is a flaw I find in my own work many times)
Despite my criticisms (which I hope are constructive) this is a good video, better and much more creative than the 8 bajillion videos of idiots dancing in front of their webcam that seem to infest this site.
this one is my favorite :D
roycekirkalore 8 months ago
This is an interesting idea. It has a sort of Monty Pythonish feel to it. My first suggestion would be to speed things up. Faster cuts and more of them, maybe more motion with the camera. Also I'd suggest delivering your lines faster (which is a flaw I find in my own work many times)
Despite my criticisms (which I hope are constructive) this is a good video, better and much more creative than the 8 bajillion videos of idiots dancing in front of their webcam that seem to infest this site.
nickelcrew 5 years ago